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MATURE: - Ongoing Thieves: The Legacy (Rated R)

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Well, this is a story that I made up. It's a fan fic of the video game Sly Cooper. It's rated R for language, some mild violence, and some sexual references/content.

Part 1 - The beginning​

This is the story of thieves, enemies, love, and legends.

My name is Roxanne Nicole Fox. I was born on November 2nd, 1987 in Almafuerte, Cordoba, Argentina. My parents had a mysterious disappearance, and I have never seen them. I was supposedly left on an orphanage doorstep by a man that saw me alone. He said nobody ever knew why my parents disappeared. I was adopted by my proud, caring, and loving parents, Miguel and Erica. I see them as my real parents because they took care of me and loved me as if I were their own. The only memoir I have from my mother and father is a stuffed animal. It's a dog that has black fur, and beige eyebrows and tail. I have named it Dante and I never let it go, for it's the most special thing I could ever possess. I have a sister named Carmelita Fox, who is a cop. We have been enemies ever since she became a cop, since I was a thief.
I possess special powers. I don't know how I got them, but they are very....strange. I have the power of all things psychic, such as telekinesis, telepathy, teleportation, and many others. I have the power to make any living thing immortal and any unliving thing come to life. I cannot use this power for I do not know how. I also have the power of spirits....but only when in grave danger. I found this out when the man that dropped me off at the orphanage saw spirits coming out of me....and they ran the Fiendish Five off....I still don't know how to activate these powers to this day.

My foster parents said that the reason that my parents disappeared was because of a very evil gang, the Fiendish Five. They have spent their years killing thieves and stealing their loot. But they were not looking for me specifically....they were looking for a raccoon.....a special raccoon. From the Cooper line. The Cooper line is a legendary line of thieves. They killed that raccoon's father...just like they killed mine. His name is Sly Cooper and he carries a cane which has been transformed many times...he has learned techniques from his ancestors, and they say there is a vault....a vault in which there is millions and millions of tons of gold. Only a Cooper can open it, and he has visited it.

The only problem is that there was a man that went by the name of Doctor M. He was mad over the Cooper fortune, and he died with the loot, because with all those years, Sly finally opened it and Dr. M followed him in. He nearly killed Sly, but instead, he died. He used lasers and bombs and any detonation that you can think of.....just for the gold. He fired too many bombs, and the whole vault collapsed. He was so crazy, that he refused to leave the fortune, on the account that he's been searching for it, and he wasn't going to give it up. Sly came out alive along with his gang. His gang consists of a turtle named "Bentley" and a hippo named "Murray". Bentley is nicknamed as "The Brains" and Murray as "The Brawn". Sly is the leader.

I am now exploring...searching the U.S.A for loot...so that I will enough money to go back to my country. But so far, I haven't made any of the U.S. currency. I must make at least 10,000 to live in my country and for my plane ticket. I am now in Los Angeles, Calfornia.



Part 2 - Friends​

"There needs to be some shelter somewhere," Roxanne said, looking everywhere for at least a box. She spotted a box under a tree big enough for her and Dante. She crawled into the box.
"This seems roomy enough." She started to get comfortable and she fell asleep inside the box. When she woke up, she was surprised to see coins on the ground.
"Great. Now they think I'm homeless. Damn, I need to stay somewhere," Roxanne said with a sigh. A raccoon passed and saw Roxanne in the box.
"Umm....are you alright?" The man said. "Yeah, yes, I'm fine...." Roxanne said, although she didn't mean it.

"Are you sure? You look kind of....tired."

"Well, I am. I can't really sleep in here." Roxanne said, pushing her back. "Well," The man said friendly, "If you want, I can take you back to my place." Roxanne looked at him with a sense of relief in her eyes. "You would take me?" "Of course I would. You seem nice." The man looked at her with a grin. "Wow! Thank you, but I really don't want to be a burden-" Roxanne said, starting to "It's no problem. My friends will actually be kind of delighted." "Well, can you tell me your name?" Roxanne said. "Sly. Sly Cooper." Roxanne froze in her tracks. The raccoon that she was looking for, just came to her? It was as if it were fate! "Sly Cooper? I know you!" Sly started to get nervous. "What? How do you know?!" Roxanne chuckled while Sly froze. "You're a legacy! I admire you! You're from the Cooper line! And your friends are Bentley and Murray! I've been looking for you forever!" Sly took a sigh of relief, knowing that she was a thief like him. "Well, what's your name?"

"My name is Roxanne Fox." Sly did the same thing Roxanne did. "Is your sister Carmelita Fox?" Roxanne found out that Carmelita has been after Sly all along. "Yes she is. But unfortunately, we're enemies because I'm a thief and she's a cop......." Roxanne said while stroking Dante. "Well she's-" Roxanne interrupted. "-after you all the time. I know, Sly. She said she was chasing a criminal." Sly looked at her up and down, up and down...."Well, come on. I think we should go now." Roxanne nodded and followed. They stayed in silence the walk there.


When they got there, Roxanne saw 2 houses. "Hey, why do you guys have 2 houses?" Roxanne said out of curiosity. "One is the safehouse which is where the guys are now and one is a house, where we usually stay to sleep and eat. This is where you'll be staying." Roxanne smiled as she saw the house because she was lucky that she found a nice person and a place to stay. "Well, you're real lucky because we have one last bed. You'll be able to sleep and eat here for as long as you want." Sly chuckled and scratched the back of his head. "Um, well, can I meet your friends?" Roxanne said, trying to draw some attention away from the subject. "Oh sure! I almost forgot. You just wait here." Sly entered the safehouse and looked back. Bentley was curious and said, "Anything wrong Sly?" Sly looked at Bentley and said, "Well, I found this girl, her name is Roxanne. She's Carmelita's sister and -" Bentley was surprised and bursted out, "SLY! How the heck do you even know that she might be undercover with Carmelita?! We'll be really screwed! She might even have guns, and she could even kill us!" Murray looked at Bentley and said, "Bentley, aren't you overreacting just a little bit?" Bentley thought that no one understood him. "Sly, she's CARMELITA'S SISTER. I know you might be attracted to her because they're sisters, but-" Sly started to get a little angry because Bentley thought Sly liked Roxanne for all the wrong reasons. He said, "That's not the reason I like her. I found her. Poor girl was sleeping in a box. She was homeless and it seems she hasn't had any luck stealing, since she didn't have any money on her." Bentley sighed. "Fine. Bring her in. IF she doesn't seem suspicious, then I may trust her. BUT I'm still gonna keep an eye on her."


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Part 3 and 4 are coming soon! Please comment! I will post parts 3 and 4 here when I get it done.
 
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Re: Sly Cooper Fan Fic (Sly Cooper is a video game. Google it.)

Bump.


Anyone?
 
Re: Sly Cooper Fan Fic (Sly Cooper is a video game. Google it.)

The story is pretty nice, interesting to read...but I think you should space out your paragraphs a little more often. It will make it easier to read.
 
Re: Sly Cooper Fan Fic (Sly Cooper is a video game. Google it.)

Interesting. Though I've not played the games of Sly Cooper (and I really need to -- cos I've been planning on doing so for a while, now @_@;;) I'm very familiar with it as I like reading up about it and I have an older brother that has all three games. I must say that the character is pretty interesting.

My critiques on it is to remember to space out your paragraphs and to remember to make a new paragraph every time the speaker changes -- that way it doesn't end up being a big chunk of text. Another thing I noticed was numbers -- I remember when I first got started writing, my dad would always tell me, "you actually write out the number unless it's three digits or more." ^^;

I'll be reading as you continue :)
 
Re: Sly Cooper Fan Fic (Sly Cooper is a video game. Google it.)

Wow, thanks guys....you guys are the first :D I'm editing the paragraphs right now and part 3 and 4 is on the way ;)
 
Re: Sly Cooper Fan Fic (Sly Cooper is a video game. Google it.)

Part 3 - Meeting Thieves​


"Roxanne," Sly said, "You can come in!"

Roxanne got cold feet and said, "No, I'm fine here. I'll be fine here...."

Sly looked at Roxanne like a lunatic and said, "Stop joking around! Come on!"

Roxanne whispered something, if anything to Dante and went in the safehouse with her heart in her mouth.


Bentley was the first to look at her. He scanned her as if he was reading one of his freakishly large manuals again. He started to grin and eventually said, "Hi Roxanne, I'm Bentley."

Roxanne also grinned and said, "Hi."

Murray came up and said, "Well, I'm just gonna come in here," with his belly in first. "I'm Murray. Nice to meet ya."

"See guys? Nothing to worry about. She's just a sneaky shy little fox." Sly petted her as if she were a dog.

"Well....what are you guys doing right now?" Roxanne said.

"WHY IS THAT ANY OF YOUR BUSINESS?! ARE YOU GONNA KILL ME?!" Bentley pretty much yelled.

"Can I see you for a second, buddy?" Sly said grabbing Bentley by the shell, faking a smile. Sly whispered behind the safehouse, "What the hell is wrong with you?! Do you want her to think you're a freak?!"

Bentley hid his face in shame. "I'm sorry, but it was never a good idea to tell me that she was Carmelita's sister. Can you ever leave just one detail out, Sly?"

Sly chuckled and said, "No. I never can. Bentley, you really need to stop freaking out when a cop relative or cop visits us....remember Carmelita? Didn't we always get along so well?"

Bentley smiled. "Well....fine. I'll 'chill' now. Just promise me she's what you think she is!"

"I promise Bentley."

"On all the loot buried in the Cooper vault?"

Sly sighed. "I promise on all the loot buried in the Cooper vault."

"Ok. Let's go inside."

"I'm telling you right now Bentley, I'm not saving your butt for you this time."

"....or the rest of body?!"

"Nope. It's your turn to apologize. I was the one who stole the gold from Venice City. It's your turn now."

"Oh no...."

They headed back in the safehouse, surprised to see Roxanne and Murray talking and laughing.


"Um, Roxanne...I'm really sorry about that." Bentley said, with a tone of embarressment.

"...It's ok. I understand that you don't trust me because of Carmelita. But trust me, I'm nothing like her. And you can call me Roxy."

"Alright! Well, now that that's over with, let's get to our mission." Sly said, drawing attention away, yet again.

"Oh yes, I almost forgot..." Bentley said, playing along with it. "Well, I'm going to have to arrange these parts for you to get in, Roxy. So this is my plan."

"There is a man here in L.A. that goes by the name of Winfred. He is RICH and I mean RICH. But, he's not what you think he is. He's a person that kills for that loot. And he's not a thief. He's a murderer. We need a plan to break into his home and steal his loot. Although I'd love to give him a taste of his own medicine, we can't. Or else we'd be murderers too, and we don't wanna be, do we?"

Roxanne shook her head.
Murray shook his head.
Sly shrugged his shoulders.

"Well....I guess most of us don't. So this is the plan.
He has amazing security...almost impossible to break. But, everything has a flaw so....

I will put some bombs in the attic entrance so Murray can get in. After that, Murray will go and break all the alarms that are underground, since they are detectors underground. Roxanne will then enter the house and look for the loot...but it's not done yet. I will then have to crack the code for the lasers through the computer next to the room where the loot is, since I have heard that the loot is heavily guarded. So then, Sly and Roxy will get the loot and take out the guards, and bada-bing, bada-boom, we get the heck out of there!"

"Um, good idea Bentley, but just one thing."

"What? That plan is perfect!"

"...I don't have a weapon to take out the guards. At least, not a weapon of matter."

"What do you mean, a weapon of matter?" Sly said, confused.

"Well, I might've left out one little detail whn I was telling you about me, Sly."

"What is it?!"

Roxanne sighed and whispered the same thing to Dante as before, God knows what. "...I have psychic powers."

The whole gang bursted out laughing.

"What, you don't believe me?!"

"HA! Of course not! HOHOHOHAHAHAA!!!" Sly said, laughing his guts out.

Roxanne got mad and got them in the air and brought them to her face. "Believe me now?"

They immediately stopped laughing.
"Uh, yeah." They all said in unison.


Part 4 - Believe in the unbelievable​


"My god, Roxanne! How do you have these powers?!" Sly said, surprised.

"That, I don't know. I suppose I was born with them...I also have some connection with spirits." Roxanne said, embarressed.

"Whoa....that's awesome." Murray said, in awe.

"Well Roxy, that's all the more better! You can use your psychic powers to take out the guards! You don't need a weapon!" Bentley said, also in awe.

"What kind of powers do you have?" Sly said.

"Well, for my psychic powers, I have telekinesis, telepathy, teleportation, hypnosis, and the ability to see the future. For my spirit power, I really don't know, because I can only use it when in grave danger. I also have the ability to make living things immortal, and unliving things come to life. But it takes a lot of energy for that."

"One word," Sly said, "Cool."

"Well, come on! What are we waiting for! Let's go!" Roxy said.

"Alright....gonna go steal some stuff.....alright." Sly said with a sort of boring tone.

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"Ok, it's your cue Bentley. Go and put the bombs in the attic entrance." Sly said.

Bentley deposited 5 bombs out of his bag and blasted the attic door to bits. "Ok Murray, go and smash the alarms."

"Going." Murray went under and smashed all the alarms with great force. Finally, he headbutted the last alarm. He got a little dizzy and sung, "I'm a little teapot short and stout...lalalalaaa..."

"...I think Murray needs to chill for a bit," Sly said.

"Yeah...OK, Roxy, go look for the loot. Call us when you find it," Bentley said, with a tone of hope.

Roxanne nodded and went in the house. She must've looked everywhere...the 10 bedrooms, the 6 living rooms, the 9 kitchens, and even the 13 bathrooms. But finally, she looked in the last room....the loot room. There were piles of gold....and also 20 guards. She stood in awe. She almost forgot about everyone else and called them through the walkie-talkies. "Guys, I found the loot room. I put the location in the GPS."

"Ok, we're coming right now."

Bentley came and hacked the computer. All the lasers disappeared. "Ok, Sly. You and Roxy take out the guards and get the loot."

"Got it," They both said.

First, Sly snuck up behind a guard and took him out. He ran back as the guards came back to see what was going on. They didn't see anything and went back. Roxanne levitated 2 of the guards and smacked them on the ground. "Top that, Ringtail."

Sly came up and took out 2 guards.

"Hmpf."

Eventually, they took out all the guards. Roxanne and Sly came up and took the loot.
"Good job, guys! Now let's get out of here!"

"Wait a minute! What are you people doing with my loot?!" A strange voice said. Everyone turned back and was surprised to see Winfred, right there behind them.

"Uh....oh." Roxanne said, knowing they were in deep trouble.

"RUN!" Bentley yelled out!

They ran for their lives, and Winfred tried to catch up, but he couldn't.

"GR! Another one got away! Oh well. I'll just move to another state."

The gang arrived at the safehouse, jumping and happier than ever. "Wow! We made it!" Roxy said with a smile on her face.
"Well, let's put this in the vault."

Murray opened the vault and put the 10 bags of loot in.
"Well, it's kind of late, I think we should hit the hay." Sly said.

"Yeah, I'm tired too," Roxy said.

"Well, you guys can go, me and Bentley aren't tired," Murray said. "We'll go later."

"Alright then. Oh Murray, one question. Where's the old bed?"
Murray got a little puzzled for a second but then understood. "Oh, we had to throw it away. It was broken."

"What?! Now where's Roxy gonna sleep?!" Sly said, worried.

"I guess with you." Murray said.
Sly sighed, and Roxy got nervous.
 
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Part 5 – Sleep with one eye open


At about 2:00 in the morning, a creaking occurred. No one heard. “Well, well, well. What a beautiful sight. Everyone’s sleeping.” The voice was no other than Winfred. He went up to Roxanne and put something in her mouth. She screamed, muffled, but then she was knocked out. The medicine was an anesthetic. Hopefully, it would do her no harm. He picked her up and went out the door. Dante in her hands.

Sly woke up slowly. “Eh….what…what happened?” He got up. He went to get some water when he looked at Roxy’s bed. He rubbed his eyes and opened them as wide as possible. “Roxy? Roxanne?!” The screaming woke up Bentley and Murray. “What?! What happened?!” Bentley yelled. “She’s gone! Roxy’s gone! Maybe she went to get some water…yeah…water.” Sly tried to believe it, but he couldn’t. It’s like a trial of jail. You can’t win if you don’t have the evidence. “Just 5 more minutes….” Murray yawned. “No! Roxanne’s gone. What are we gonna do?! She could have escaped this! She’s a ghost for God’s sake!” Sly was practically going crazy. “Why do you even care about her? She’s nothing special,” Bentley said, and Murray agreed. “No…you don’t get it. I took her in. I was the one who gave her shelter. And I can’t let her be killed! If you think I’m just gonna let her go by, you’re a lunatic!” Bentley and Murray looked at Sly as though he was the lunatic. “Well,” Murray said, “Who do you think took her?” Sly puzzled and Bentley waited. “You guys really don’t know?” Murray and Sly shook their heads. “Ugh, I guess I am the smart one. Winfred took her!” Sly and Murray said, “We knew that."



Kind of a short one, but part 6 is coming soon.
 
Part 6 - Patience


~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ At Winfred’s house…~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~

“Hmm…..a very odd specimen,” Winfred said, pacing his thoughts. He looked at Dante. “Why does she care so much about this doll?” He tried to take it out of Roxanne’s hands. Roxanne made an irritated face and grasped on to Dante. Winfred gasped and was surprised. “What? How?” Winfred whispered under his breath. He wrote down something on a notepad, maybe observations or studying on Roxanne.


Back in the gang’s house…

“So let’s go! Come on,” said Sly, already heading out the door.

“No, Sly! We can’t go yet! If we don’t make a plan, we’ll end up like Roxanne!” Bentley said, hoping Sly wouldn’t be his stubborn self again. Fortunately, he listened and sat down. Bentley made a plan as he thought of it. This was his final plan.

“Ok, here it is. Winfred, obviously, must’ve already had tighter security, as we think. I looked it up, and he has a super advanced security! It will spot any person trying to get in the house without a key! Now, I have done my research, as always, and have found out one flaw. If we screw up, it’ll be the end of us all. There is a VERY slim chance of doing this, but I’m going to trust you guys. There is a land mine field outside of his house. Only he can activate it and deactivate it with a code that he changes daily. You have to walk across it. Sly, unfortunately, you will have to go first since you are the best-“

“At puzzles. Ah. The sweet serenity of being blown up or live.”

“This is no laughing matter, Sly. If you get blown up, we all go with you. I’ve found out that it goes in a pattern. There is one in the first row, two in the second and so on and so forth. Sly, its life or death. If you screw up, like I said, we’re all dead. No pressure, though.”

Sly stood with his mouth open. “No pressure?!”

“Exactly. Now, when you get to the other side, if you do-“

“Again with the pressure,” said Sly with a sigh.

“…anyway. If you actually live, I will go to the same path that you went through and deactivate the land mines for a fast getaway. As I can see, Roxanne must be being studied, since Winfred is the one to ‘study rare specimen’, so I’ve heard. After this, Murray will come in and check what Winfred is doing. I know you wanna have a fighting part in this, Murray, so you have to hit him so hard that you knock him out. We grab Roxanne before he wakes up and we make a break for it. I’ve created a cloak that we will have to activate once Winfred comes running. It’ll make us invisible, and we’re done!”

Sly and Murray discussed as if they were judges. “We like it.”




Again, sorry for double posting.
 
Part 7 – It takes a thief to steal from a thief

Sly was the first to head out the door.

“WAIT!” Murray and Bentley followed.

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Bentley gazed at the land mines. They were enormous. He just imagined himself next to Sly, blown up into turtle and raccoon soup.

“Let’s just hope you survive.” Maybe those were the last words Sly would hear of Bentley.

Sly walked up to the land mines. He hesitated to move. He walked slowly, carefully, and lightly. He steps on the 1st row………….

Safety.

He takes a breath of relief. He walks across the 1st row, trying to sense which tile doesn’t have the bomb. On the 2nd row……..

Success.

On the 2nd row, he hopes he stays on this roll. Hopefully, he’ll get to the 3rd one, which is the last. Bentley stands back with regret and Murray prays. He walks on to the 3rd……..

BOOM!!!!

Bentley started to scream and Murray held him back.

“SLY! NO!” Tears gave food to the grass and screams were heard.

Suddenly, a figure comes out of the smoke. It limps….it…it falls. Bentley and Murray go the same path Sly went. There he was. Bentley ran towards him and picked him up. No response.

“Sly?! Speak to me! Don’t quit on me….” Bentley pushed him, shoved him, he finally gave up. Murray held him. “It’s ok. He’ll be fine….” They hoped with all the hope they had.

Something came up. A shadow. It had a gun? “What’s that?” Murray looked up. “It’s Carmelita!” Bentley said. “No…not now. This is a really bad time…” Carmelita jumped their way. She glared at them. She saw Sly knocked out, Bentley crying, and Murray trying to comfort him. “What? What the-” Carmelita stopped and walked. She knew that they weren’t in the mood. “What happened?” Bentley and Murray stood back.

Carmelita looked at Sly. “Sly? What happened, I’m serious. Whoever did this….I’ll…I’ll…” Carmelita looked for words. Bentley spoke. “Winfred….his security….he…he just…” Bentley shivered and shook. He couldn’t even speak.

“Winfred? That little….” Carmelita was very angry. “Go through the path Sly went through. He already cleared the bombs.” Carmelita saw the markings and went through the path. She bursted through the door.

“FREEZE!”



Part 8 coming soon!
 
Part 8 - Heart skips and beats

Winfred gasped. He froze.

“You have 10 seconds.”

He grabbed a gun out of his coat pocket. Carmelita was the one to gasp. “One step. One step and the girl dies.” Carmelita dropped her gun. “And after that, maybe I’ll point the gun at you. Sisterhood. What a wonder.” He put his finger on the trigger and went to the safe, still pointing the gun.

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“We need to go Bentley, it’s too late.” Murray let go of Bentley.

“He can’t be dead….I bet…when we come back…he’ll be up and running….just like a computer in sleep mode.” Bentley tried to fake a smile on his face.

Murray patted Bentley’s shoulder and walked on the porch. “Are you coming?”

Bentley looked at Sly and wiped his eyes and nose. “Fine….for Sly.”

They went inside. They walked across the 90-foot hallway. They saw
Roxanne and Carmelita. Most of all, they saw Winfred and Carmelita.
“Now he has Carmelita and Roxy?! It can’t be! This guy is worse than the
Fiendish Five and Clockwork combined! Sneak up on him, Murray!”

Murray looked confused. “Me? You’re more silent! I weigh 500 pounds for
Crying out loud!”

“Fine. Come behind me.”

Bentley tip-toed in front of Murray.

“AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA! FOR SLY!”

Murray gave a great big punch to Winfred and Bentley followed. Bentley hurt his hand hitting him.

“Owww!”

Murray laughed. Winfred lay on the floor, accepting his defeat. “Ha! Finally, I got him!” Carmelita put him in handcuffs and kicked him while he was down.

“And Roxanne?” A voice was heard.

“What the- Sly?!” Bentley and Murray gasped.

“Stop worrying about me. You’ve forgotten the whole reason you came here.”

Carmelita, Bentley, Sly, and Murray went to where Roxanne was laid down. Carmelita was the first to look at her.

“What you’ve gotten yourself into Roxanne….. I told you…..it’s too dangerous…..you kept going…..” Carmelita sighed.

Sly looked at her. “Well? Are we gonna wake her up or what?”

“Oh. Yeah.” Bentley almost forgot.

Sly went up to her and shook her. He shook her again. Then finally, he yelled in her ear. “ROXY!!”

“What?! Is he gone?!” Roxanne woke up with her eyes wide open.

“Yeah. He is. It’s safe now.” Sly smiled.

“Well. It’s over.” Murray and Bentley smiled too.

“You guys…just saved us. Thank you.” Carmelita finally smiled. “Roxanne, I just wish that you wouldn’t have put your life in danger.”

“Let’s go home.” The ever-famous speech of relief.

The End
Or is it?


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