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EVERYONE: - Ongoing This is by me and Peter.

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Part 1
By, Peter

Ash,"Brock are we there yet?"Brock,"No, not for another mile."'No, actully we are here already",said a boy.The boy was in a swim suit, he had glasses that had a camcoder on it.He had brown hair with a ponytail, and next to him was a Totodile."Hi there.You're new.The name is Peter.",Peter said.Dawn,"Hi.I'm Dawn, and this is Ash and Brock."
Peter,"Nice to meet ya."Hey, Ash you won't happened to be her boyfriend, would ya?"Ash,"Why you ask that?!"Dawn had blushed.Peter,"My Totodile has a feeling."Later Peter had brought them to his house.Dawn,"Hey when is the contest here?"Peter,"Not till 3 days.You do like Ash don't ya?Are saw you blush before."Dawn,"Yes, but he doesn't it in me."Peter push Ash on to Dawn and they hugged.Dawn,"Thanks!!!"Peter,"I supply happiness."
The End.

~~

Part 2
By, Julia

One day Ash, Dawn and Peter where in a Gym for Ash to battle. Ash said, "Hey Peter do you want to battle the Gym too?" "OK but I know I will just win!" Said Peter. Dawn said, " I know you both are talking about the battle but look Team Rocket has the Gym's Pokemon we have got to help!" "I will do it." Said Julia coming in the door to battle the Gym too. "How are you?" Said both Ash and Dawn. " O that is Julia my friend." Said Peter. "Go Shinx!" Said Julia. " O wow a Shinx! So I say go Magmar! And use a Fire move!" Said Peter. "OK now Shinx use Thunder Fang!" Said Julia. " They are now gone all thanks to Julia and Peter!" Said Ash.

The End

~~

Part 3
By, Peter

Out of the clouds was a ew.Julia,"Peter, look!"Peter,"Its the Mew I been searching!Follow it!"They all raced to catch the Mew.Dawn had tripped and spraded her ankle.Ash had picked her up and carered her.Peter,"AHHHHHH!I hate goose cashes!Go ......Thunder had it the ground."rrrrggggghhh!", said Julia.Peter,"are you ok?"Julia,"Yeah.."Team Rocket,"The Mew is ours!"Ash"Pikachu use Volt Tackle NOW!"Pikachu had blow Team Rocket away.Julia,"Sorry Peter.Mew got away again..."Peter,"Not exactly...Go Mew!"Out of a Ultra Ball came Mew."You catched it?",said Dawn.Peter,"Yah.During the battle.Now I can get more info on him.+ a new team member."Dawn,"Ash, you can put me down now...."Ash,"Ok."Ash blushed.
Julia,"Hmmmmm......The more they hang out the closer they get...."Peter,"Life is full of love and Pokemon."

The End

~~

Part 4
By Julia

So on they went to Drumonia city. ( A Made up city by me! ) Dawn, " So Ash what about we kiss now?" "No way!! We can't kiss with Peter and Julia!" Said Ash. No no no Ash. We kiss when they are gone!" Said Dawn. "Aw OK I get it now. So we do the kiss when Peter and Julia are gone. But when are they going somewhere?" Said Ash. Julia, OK Dawn and Ash we have to go now to the Gym here at Drumonia city. OK? You think you can be good?"

~~

Dawn and Ash said, " Yes we can be good!" Peter, OK we now have to go. Come on Julia." " OK but I just know they are going to kis when we are gone. He he." Peter, " So you think when we are gone to look for some Pokemon Ash and Dawn well kiss." Julia, "Yes you got it now."

The End.

~~

Part 5
By, Peter

Peter and Ash were lost in a cave because Cyrus kidnaped Dawn,Brock and Julia.Peter,"Cyrus!You can't hind forever!Cyrus,"Quite the oppisite."A Crobat was slicing Ash and Peter.Peter,"This is my favorite shirt!!"Ash,"Pikachu and Mew have to both use Volt Tackle to defeat it!"Mew and Pikachu defeated Crobat.A wing attack knocked Peter out.Cyrus,"Hand over the Mew."Ash,"Never!"Cyrus,"Honkrow..."Peter was holding down Cyrus.Peter,"Get the others and Mew and get out!The place is going to blow!"Ash,"OK!"
The others had lefted.Ash,"Peter..."Peter,"Go... I will be find....."He got out and the others got out.Dawn,"He sacficed himself for us..."Ash,"It will be ok..."Brock,"Look!"Peter was fling out of a hole.Peter,"Ouch!Ahhh...going be soar in the morning...."Julia,"You ok?"Peter,"A bottle of soda and I will be fine."Everyone was happy.

The End.

~~

Part 6
By Julia

So Ash, Dawn, Julia and Peter where now herding to Trum town a nice little town. So Peter said, "So Ash are we in Trum town yet?" Ash, "No but right up there is a little town that we can stop at!" The town is called Ryse town." said Julia. "How do you know this!" said Dawn. "O just from Peter." Said Julia. "Yep me and Julia know it all I just do not know when we get to Trum town. But Julia knows when we get there!" said Peter. Ash, "Here we are Ryse town!" So they ran to Ryse town! Dawn, "Yay we are here!" Peter, "Good I am happy now."

The End till Part 7.
 
Ugh. I'm not reading this thing until you learn to write actual sentences, and to start a new paragraph when someone new speaks. :(
 
If I ever put together an Encyclopedia of Suck, your story will have a thirty page entry.
 
Yeah, a punch huh?

How do you plan to get your tiny, ten-year old fist through the internet?

Anyway, you don't stand a chance against me or any of my three brothers. If I punched you in the chest, you lungs would rupture so violently that your heart would liquify and your ribcage would shatter into thousands of miniscule splinters.

But I don't beat up people who are younger than me, so I'd probably just grab you hands and hold them still till you calmed down.
 
If you want peace, why are you yelling about "A fat-ass punch in the face"?

And here are two facts:

1) I didn't insult you.

2) Your hands are very small. It's a fact of life. Birds fly. Guns kill people. Republicans rig elections. Ten year olds have small hands.
 
1.Sorry about the punch thing.2.Thirthy paged story about the story in a encyclopedia of the suck?3.My hands are almost the size of my dad's.
 
1) It's alright. I was like that when I was ten too.

2)Yes. Thirty pages. Your story would take up about half. The rest would be a psychological analysis of why your story sucks, and what factors may have influenced you two when you wrote it.

3) One of three things:

a. You are lying.
b. Your father has small hands.
c. Your definition of "almost" is very loose.
 
Wait, you seem really sensitive about the size of your hands: are you worried that they might be too small?

Are they like the size of kumquats or something?

But seriously; your story is really bad.
 
So I see it's an issue now.

Why do you have trouble talking about it? Is it because you think that people will view you as less of a (ten year old) man if they know about your small hands?
 
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