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TEEN: Time for Change {TfC project HALTED until further notice}

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Tell me something.... Oh yes, your asking why the heck I'm posting this now, when I promised I would in the summer of 2011.

Well, my stupid mind anticipates a lot. So yeah, it was hard to not write down at least a few pages of this story on word. I'm just giving you the prologue because I didn't quite finish part 1 of the story.

Yeah, I said part 1. Why not chapters? It just easier to me, as well as I think chapters would've messed up the whole thing (since this is really based on a RP I'm in on another site.)

So, updating will be slower than the normal updates of Razayka. (I'm still working on chapter 9, by the way. Yeah, I know I'm slow, but that's how I work.)

Now you probably want me to shut up right now because I'm giving you too much information.

I think that's all you need to know right now, except for the fact that this story is rated PG-13 for violence, some language, and a very very small bit of sexual scenes at the very end of the story. (But I promise you it won't be too graphic.)

Yeah, that's it. Now enjoy this very short prologue of my newest fan-fiction, Time for Change!


Time for Change



Prologue: Shadows are Gathering​

{Pt. 1}The Change
{Pt. 2}The Enemies Within Ourselves
{Pt. 3}Dancing Shadows
{Epilogue}Rivers Flow in You​


Fifty years before modern times.....
Olive Branch Way, Ecruteak City. Time: 1:13 A.M.

Leaves rustled along the deserted alleyway, created by the flapping of mighty wings descending to the ground from the sky. A scarlet shape dropped onto the hard and rough asphalt and green-tipped wings folded gently to the shape's side.

It quickly walked down the alley, long white claws that gleamed in the moonlight of the waning moon clicked on the pavement. At the end of the alley was a man. He was slumped up against the brick wall of an apartment, face in the shadows. The bird quickened her pace, wondering if the man was injured or sick.

"Are you alright, sir?" She asked in a human voice, the tone light and feminine. The face moved and large, somber black eyes stared at the colorful Pokemon in front of him.

"I'm fine..." He mumbled back, voice low and intimidating. As he spoke, the Pokemon managed to get a good look of the man. He was dressed head to toe in black, a long sweeping cape covered his back and made a hood that covered the top of his head. All that was visible on him was his nose and mouth, and the small glint of somber black eyes that held hard times in their shadowy depths. His leg was twisted in an odd position which the Pokemon quickly noted was broken.

"That leg... It looks bad..." She mumbled, motioning to the awkward limb.

The man shrugged, "It's nothing." But yet even as he said this, he winced even if he slightly moved his leg.

The Pokemon blinked and moved towards it, golden beak low to the ground. The man noticed this and stiffened, "What are you doing?" He demanded, deathly afraid of the bird. She just smiled.

"This..." She answered and placed a claw on the broken bone. The man squeezed his eyes shut, expecting pain, but nothing happened. He opened his eyes to see the Pokemon standing next to his now magically healed leg. He looked in bewilderment at his healer.

"What did you just do?" He asked in a shaky voice, awed by the power this Pokemon possessed.

"Recover." She answered in that same beautiful voice that the man had grown increasingly fond of. He stood up and was still surprised as his leg didn't hurt at all.

"Thanks." He said, looking at the bird.

"No problem." She replied.

An awkward silence stretched through the two and then suddenly the Pokemon asked, "What's your name? I'm Ho-Oh." The man blinked before replying, "Call me...Burakku."

"Burakku... I shall remember it." And then Ho-Oh bowed.

Burakku smiled, his smile noticeably twisted. "You don't have to call me that though, I really don't like it. If you want you can call me Shadowmancer. I make swords you see and I'm pretty good. I also like the color black." He explained his nickname with a smirk.

Ho-Oh only laughed, "Oh no, I actually like Burakku better. Although I can call you Shadowmancer if I want."

Burakku was again surprised, but kept his smile, "Alright then, Ho-Oh. You can just call me Burakku."


***********​


"Higher, higher!"

"If I go any higher, we'll be in space!"

Ho-Oh and Burakku both laughed like children as they whisked through the clouds of the Johto Region. A few weeks had passed since they had first met and they couldn't get enough of each other. Everyone commented how good of friends they were even if they were of different species. Sometimes people gave them looks of disgust as they talked with each other kindly and helped each other out. They didn't care, they were only friends after all.

"Shall we land?" Ho-Oh asked, looking up at Burakku. He nodded and Ho-Oh coasted to a stop, "Hang on!" She yelled and plummeted for the ground.

In seconds, the ground was visible and Ho-Oh gradually slowed down and landed with a soft thud on the cobblestone road of Olivine City.

"Well that was nice." Burakku said as he hopped off Ho-Oh's back. Ho-Oh smiled, "You're welcome."

Burakku looked around and noticed the Olivine Diner was close by. "If only you were human...." He mumbled under his breath.

"What was that?"

"Oh nothing!"

Burakku couldn't tell her the truth. He actually in fact was starting to like Ho-Oh, her magnificence awed him and her personality was beyond as beautiful as she was on the outside. He really did like her, but he didn't have the guts to tell her the truth. I mean, how awkward would that be? Pokemon and human together? It wasn't right...


***********​


Burakku sighed as he sat down on the cliff near Olivine City. He looked out among the vast ocean and sighed again. The patter of footsteps alerted him, but he knew who it was.

More weeks had passed of Burakku keeping his secret. And now... He was about to reveal it.

Ho-Oh stepped up to him, near his side, "You called for me."

Burakku nodded, "Look, we need to talk."

"I'm listening."

Burakku looked at her, somber black eyes unwavering. "Ho-Oh I...." He trailed off, not knowing what to say.

"It's alright, go on."

Burakku closed his eyes and leaned in close to where her ear would've been and then he whispered in the most emotional tone he had ever done, "I love you."

He opened his eyes to see Ho-Oh looking at him, tears in her scarlet eyes. But these were tears of joy. "Oh Burakku, I love you too!"

He looked at her, shocked, but that same handsome and twisted smile crossed his face and he closed his eyes. Thank you, Arceus...

"But.... I don't know..." Ho-Oh said suddenly. Burakku bit his lip.

"I mean... I'm a Pokemon, you're a human... We can't."

Burakku reached into his jet-black coat pocket, "I know..." He then pulled out a syringe filled with electric blue liquid. Ho-Oh shuddered, "What's that?"

Burakku smiled, "It's a serum consisting of Swellow feathers and Gyarados scales. It can turn any Pokemon into a human." He explained.

Ho-Oh gazed at him, wide-eyed, "Oh my..."

Burakku continued, "Although it's amazing it does have a bad after-affect. If you don't get the serum out of your body by the blue moon, the virus implanted inside will take over your body and kill you."

"... And yet you want me to take this?"

"Don't worry! I'll give you the cure once the blue moon comes up!"

And so, Ho-Oh agreed and before you knew it, there was a beautiful young red-headed woman sitting in front of Burakku. And as the sun set in the horizon they leaned in and kissed each other.


***********


Two years later...

Two years. Two years it had been of Ho-Oh and Burakku living together. Two years of love, joy, and no worries.

Now, Burakku had to leave for a business trip to Saffron City in Kanto and he gave Ho-Oh the cure before he left as he knew the blue moon would come in a week prior. He would be away for at least a year. It was a big business trip.

After the blue moon had come and gone, Ho-Oh had gotten a new neighbor in the Brass Tower that was right beside the Bell Tower. It was a large, shining Pokemon which the town folk had dubbed "Lugia" after lutetium which is a silverish element. Ho-Oh had decided to introduce herself to the new Pokemon and at once they became great friends. He told her all about a colony of Lugia that lived in the Whirl Islands near Cianwood City. He had decided to live here after hearing about another Legendary which was Ho-Oh herself.

During the time Burakku was away, Ho-Oh had grown increasingly interested in Lugia, and soon she suddenly found herself falling into a relationship with the great silver beast. She knew her heart lied with Burakku, but for some reason, she didn't want Burakku in her life anymore. She didn't like being a human, and if she was in her Pokemon form with Burakku it would look awkward. She knew it would be hard telling him the truth, but she had too... Or, maybe not.

Ho-Oh had presented an Egg with Lugia. It was wrong in every way possible. She had really betrayed Burakku now.

"This is great!" Lugia had exclaimed when Ho-Oh passed the news of the Egg, although Ho-Oh was pretty silent about it.

It hatched just a week before Burakku would return from Saffron. Ho-Oh mothered it well and taught the new baby Lugia many things. She didn't name him, she just called him "Lugia". The father was thrilled about the baby and acted each passing day as if nothing would get any better or worse than it was now. Ho-Oh felt like dirt. This wasn't what she had planned, and there was no way she could break the tragic news to Burakku. He would be too stunned and probably hate her forever. Ho-Oh felt pure agony inside her, it was just to much.


When Burakku arrived, the citizens had told him that Ho-Oh had gone off to search for a pure-hearted Trainer. She didn't want to be caught or anything, she was just on a mission. Burakku was crestfallen, but he still continued on to the Bell Tower. He wanted to come home to Ho-Oh and give her the virus so she could be human again, but he came home to a different surprise.

He climbed up the steep stairway of the Bell Tower and once he got to the top most floor where they lived, he heard crying. Baby Pokemon crying and a voice. He peered around the giant pillar in the center of the room and saw with shocked eyes a large white and indigo dragon-like Pokemon looking down at a smaller version of itself which was crying non-stop.

"Who are you?" He demanded, catching the Pokemon's attention.
He turned around and smiled, "Oh, I'm Lugia and I just moved here a few months ago. I'm visiting my son since I live in the Brass Tower right beside here."

"And he's in my house because...?"

The Lugia blinked in surprise, "Because Ho-Oh, the mother lives here? Um... I'm her mate?"

Burakku nearly stumbled onto the floor in shock. What? Did he just hear the Pokemon right? He must be dreaming. He pinched himself hard. It hurt. A lot.

"No, no, no...." He mumbled under his breath. The Pokemon tilted his head, "Something the matter?"

Suddenly, Burakku whipped his head up and faced Lugia with a look of immense rage that scared the great beast.

"Yes there fucking is something the matter! I'm supposed to be with Ho-Oh, I'm her true mate! And... And.... Did she... Did she just go away so she wouldn't have to tell me her little 'problem'?" He growled louder than an Arcanine. He then continued with a hiss that sounded like an Arbok, "Get out of my house... I don't care if you're the father or not... Just... Get. Out."

Lugia's eyes widened, but he did as he was told and fled out the open window to the sky back to th Brass Tower.

Burakku stood there, just staring at the window where Lugia had escaped. He felt his eyes water, something that hadn't happened to him in years. And then he stumbled to the floor, curled up in a ball, and cried. Cried loud and long over the Pokemon who had betrayed him... He thought she loved him.... But, maybe it was because he was human that she cheated.... Maybe they weren't just meant to be. But it was also possible that it was all that new Pokemon's fault. He should have known Ho-Oh was already taken. It was all his and Ho-Oh's fault and Burakku knew they would pay the hard way...

He stopped weeping and looked up, his emotionless black eyes glistened with tears and burned with inner rage. He was furious and he would take this fury to the ultimate level.


***********​


A fire had struck the Brass Tower that night. Many of the townspeople proposed that it had been caused by lightning striking the tower since there was a big storm going on when it happened. The rain had quelled the fire, and three Pokemon had been announced dead after being trapped inside the tower when the fire started. Ho-Oh had come briefly to visit and since she felt sorry for the befallen Pokemon known as Raikou Entei and Suicune, she reincarnated them and they all scattered to different areas of Johto.

After the reincarnation, some firefighters had returned from the burning building and announced another Pokemon dead. The shining silver Pokemon known as Lugia had burned to death as he was trying to escape the flames. The news was so sorrowful that to this day no one says that Lugia had perished in the flames, they instead state that he simply escaped the fire to the Whirl Islands. But the one who had been the most shocked was Ho-Oh.
After a mourning ritual, Ho-Oh retreated to the top of the Bell Tower, covered in her own tears.

When she landed, she expected to go inside the tower, but that was when she heard a voice.

"Pity about the Brass Tower."

Ho-Oh whirled around to see a man dressed in black, cape billowing out behind him in the high altitude winds. In his arms he carried a sleeping baby Lugia who seemed peaceful in the man's arms. Ho-Oh knew this man. She knew him very well.

"Burakku..."

Burakku whirled around, black eyes wild. Ho-Oh was startled by his expression, but continued. "Burakku you must know... I... I'm sorry! I really didn't mean too..."

He just smiled that same, twisted and horrifying smile and began to laugh. It was a heartless laugh, coming from the darkest corners of Burakku's heart. "Didn't mean too? Didn't mean too!? You must be joking! Of course you meant to, didn't you?" Ho-Oh didn't answer, she just stared at the ground solemnly, "Didn't you!?"

Ho-Oh flinched and noticed the baby had woken up. Burakku looked down upon it as it stared wide-eyed at him and he smiled even wider. "Oh you poor thing... You don't have a daddy anymore, do you? You just have a mummy who doesn't know where her heart lies.... I bet you want a new life now, don't you? I expect you don't want to be in this world anymore...." He hissed in delight as he continued, "Don't worry, Uncle Burakku can help you with that."

Ho-Oh's heart began to thump in her chest. The baby Lugia started to cry again and she took one step closer, "Get away from him, Barakku! Please, can we just settle this in a non-violent manner?"

Burakku's eyes looked to Ho-Oh, still wild with bloodlust. "I'm sorry, Ho-Oh, but it cannot be helped. This Pokemon was never meant to live, so he will die. Just as that fool that lived in the Brass Tower... A worthless life... All Pokemon have worthless lives, even you. What could be better than to just," He drew out a long and sharp dagger that he had probably crafted himself, "kill them?" He placed the cold blade on the baby's neck, making it utter a small whimper before shutting up. Ho-Oh took another step forward and as she did so, realization spread through her, "It was you? You had started the fire, not the lightning! I can't believe you..."

Burakku just laughed without emotion again, "You finally figured that out? Boy, you really are dumb." He made another chilling laugh before driving the blade deeper into the baby's throat, cutting some skin.

"Please, stop!" Ho-Oh cried, tears forming in her eyes, "For the love of Arceus, stop!"

Burakku ignored her and continued to drive the dagger deeper and Ho-Oh knew if he went any further that would be the end of the baby's little life. Ho-Oh decided words would not help and switched onto the offensive side.

"Burakku... Put that weapon down, now!" She shouted.

He gazed back at her with a crooked smile and simply said, "No."

Ho-Oh screamed in fury and attacked Burakku, driving him against the hard wood roofing of the Bell Tower top. His dagger flew from his hand and he yelled a numerous amount of curses before diving for it. As he was scrambling around in the dark of the night, Ho-Oh managed to grab the barely conscious baby and hoist it gently on her back. Swiftly, she took off and flew in the direction of the Whirl Islands.

Burakku finally grabbed a hold of the dagger and whipped around laughing evilly to see only emptiness. He screamed in outrage as he saw the flying form of Ho-Oh carrying a smaller Pokemon on her back.

"This isn't over! Our business hasn't been finished yet, Ho-Oh! You can count on that!"


***********​

Ho-Oh flew on to the Whirl Islands and gave the baby Lugia to the colony of Lugia. A couple was willing to take care of the baby and they raised him as their own. He never remembered Ho-Oh as his mother, but she did visit him often and the parents would always say she was a friend of theirs.

After she had given her child a loving home, she retreated back to Ecruteak. It was almost dawn by the time she got there and as she landed in an empty street, she saw a black figure approach her.

He chuckled heartlessly as he neared closer. "You know I will find that wretched child, Ho-Oh."

Ho-Oh sighed and just went on to the point, "Burakku... Why did you burn down the Brass Tower? Why did you want to kill my son?"

Burakku growled, "That was supposed to be our son, but no, you decided it was only fair to look for someone else. Was I just some sort of experiment to play with? Is that it? Am I just a thing to you?"

"No, Burakku, you're more than that..."

"Really? Because it doesn't seem that way."

He unsheathed the dagger from before, "Why don't we just settle this now, hm?" He hissed.

Ho-Oh took one step back, "Burakku... Put it down, words are more powerful than actions."

"Shut up, I don't care about you anymore... I just want your blood on this dagger... Surrender, Ho-Oh, you will lose and you know it."

"No."

"Fine... Your death awaits."

He lunged for Ho-Oh, but she began to glow a brilliant white, blinding Burakku. She shot a giant ball of energy towards him, but this wasn't any ordinary Pokemon move, this was something that only Ho-Oh had the power to do.

It hit Burakku and a bloodcurdling scream escaped his mouth and then... Nothing.

His body fell down with a thud on the ground, eyes blank and non-focused. Ho-Oh was panting as she gazed at his body. He wasn't dead, but his soul had been ripped from his body. And right beside his body was a dark cloud of evil energy. This was his soul; it had been corrupted once he thought of revenge on Ho-Oh and killed Lugia. There was no way Ho-Oh could purify it now, it was beyond helping.

Soul-sucking was one of the worst ways of punishment. It was even worse than dying itself because without a soul you were nothing. You had no emotion, no pain, no anything. You could stand and walk sure, but you were just blank and distant...

"Ho-Oh... Come here..." The soul lured, but Ho-Oh didn't take the bait. She shook her head and the soul made a chilling laugh that would echo in Ho-Oh's mind forever. And with that, it was gone.

Ho-Oh knew if the soul didn't find another body to live in, it would melt away into nothingness. But the soul knew that, and it would find people and Pokemon with weakened souls to live in, then it would keep jumping to another body without stopping. It was a never-ending cycle of seeking that wouldn't stop until someone purified the soul so it would simply float off to the Heavens...

Since the incident, Burakku's soul changed its name to The Shadowmancer and was the main reason for hate in the world. Ho-Oh knew it was all her fault, but she wouldn't kill herself for it like many people would've done.

As Burakku's soul vanished from view, Ho-Oh looked down at his soulless husk he left behind. Black eyes stared blankly ahead at nothing, mouth open and body sprawled out on the concrete. He looked dead, but Ho-Oh knew the body would move at any time.

As the pink rays of the sun peeked over the horizon and Ho-Oh readied herself to take off once more, a glint caught her eye. She looked down and saw a glistening diamond ring that had come from a box from Burakku's coat pocket. Ho-Oh's eyes began to water. Burakku had wanted to marry her, but he had never gotten the chance.

Ho-Oh closed her eyes and with pain welling up inside her, she took off once more into the lightening sky.


***​

Present Day​

There sat a black swivel chair, the person that sat inside faced the front where screens showed many mazelike hallways. A pale hand was petting the head of a small Houndoom.

Suddenly, the door to the room opened and a man dressed in all black stepped in. “Sir,” It addressed.

“What is it?” The hidden person asked dully.

“Only a couple Legendaries were affected… We have no clue why.” The man said.

“What?” The pale hand froze on the Houndoom’s head.

“Here… I have a list of the Legends affected.” The man handed over a clipboard that held a sheet of paper. The pale hand grabbed it and the shadowy eyes scanned the paper, reading the fine print.

The figure made a sly smile, “Well, well, well… Seems we have all my favorite Legendaries, keep an eye on them.”

He waved a hand to dismiss his messenger, and the man saluted once before stepping out and closing the door behind him.

The figure in the swivel chair began to pet his Houndoom again, smiling a toothy grin as he though of his plan.

He reached into his pocket and grabbed a cigarette pack. He took one and reached into his other pocket where he brought out a lighter. He lit it and puffed out a smoke ring, filling the air with a smoky smell.

“Well… Seems this plan is going well…” He said in a silky smooth voice.

“The Legends won’t see it coming…”​
 
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Re: Time for Change, a new fan-fic brought to you by Shiny Ninetales!{Prologue}

Ok, first thing's first--spacing. Remember, space out each paragraph separately.
As for the length, as a prologue, it's fine. However, the plot itself has amazing potential! It gives off the idea of a dark scheme without revealing too much, and from here quite a lot is possible! I look forward to seeing more!
 
Re: Time for Change, a new fan-fic brought to you by Shiny Ninetales!{Prologue}

Oh yeah! I totally forgot that :banghead: I'll go fix it DX

Thank you! A lot of people are saying that offline too. (Posted it on another site). Hopefully, this story can attract as much attention as Razayka did.
 
Re: Time for Change, a new fan-fic brought to you by Shiny Ninetales!{Prologue}

-looks around- Oh, I thought I replied a long time ago! o_O

Anyways, awesome story so far.
 
Re: Time for Change, a new fan-fic brought to you by Shiny Ninetales!{Prologue}

Not bad... but there's not much to say.
The prologue's short. I'll be following it.
Could you VM me when you release a new chapter?
 
Re: Time for Change, a new fan-fic brought to you by Shiny Ninetales!{Prologue}

I can't say anything other than it has potential. Yes, it's true that all stories have potential, but this one looks promising. You did a nice job in drawing people in, using a really short prologue and giving almost no information. That's the key to getting readers; keep them guessing. However, I might add that you shouldn't do that TOO much. Ambiguity is good, but don't overwhelm the audience with it.

Anyway, your bait worked and I'm hooked so I'll be reading in the future. Don't disappoint! :)
 
Re: Time for Change, a new fan-fic brought to you by Shiny Ninetales!{Prologue}

Wow.Talk about cliffhangers! I'll check it out everyday to make sure I read the whole thing. Like everyone before me said, don't do TOO many cliffhangers. Definitly hints at an interesting plot.
 
Re: Time for Change, a new fan-fic brought to you by Shiny Ninetales!{Prologue}

Hrm... like many others said, it does have potential. But one minor thing that put me off was the use of "Legends" as a word. That's a slang term, and somehow I doubt somebody in the Pokémon world would want to use a slang term to refer to a deity... but ah well. Fanon speaking. Continue on with your fic.
 
Re: Time for Change, a new fan-fic brought to you by Shiny Ninetales!{Prologue}

Yeah I know xD This won't be all cliffhangers I can tell you.

Thabet: Oh yus, I shall. I do that to my boyfriend anyway so >P

Giratina!: "Legends" is generally a term I use a lot in real life. I guess sometimes it can slip into one of my stories or another.
I'll be keeping an eye out for that, but sometimes it's a pain to write Legendaries all the time when your talking about all of them DX And since I'm a lazy butt I tend to take shortcuts.
 
Re: Time for Change, a new fan-fic brought to you by Shiny Ninetales!{Prologue}

So, I started on part 1... And yet I didn't finish it DX. So, I shall now post what I have written (7 pages on word so far). Once I get more, I'll keep adding it to this post. I may end up doing this for all the parts.

Sound like a deal?

Part 1; The Change




Thunder crackled in the distance. A time of great peril was to come.

Giratina lifted his great golden head to the sky, bored out of his mind. He walked forward in the dense forest where he was, looking for something to eat. It was always foodless in the Reverse World. Giratina always came to Pokerus to eat, and to eat only.

He dipped his head down as he saw a berry bush. Delicately, he plucked the berries and chewed them slowly in his beak-like mouth. Scarlet eyes looked around for more when suddenly he felt somewhat different. A sharp pain made him roar in frustration. His six legs suddenly became useless as more pain rushed through. In anger and desperation, he shot Aura Spheres everywhere, burning down numerous trees. He finally fell to the ground on his side and blacked out. Little did he know, he was in for a surprise…


***​


Giratina fidgeted. Something didn’t feel right. He opened his eyes, but quickly closed them again with a grimace. He felt frozen to the spot. He opened his eyes again, slower this time. They opened to reveal a thick canopy with some sky poking through.

Wearily, Giratina tried to move one of his six legs, but strangely nothing happened. Screwing up his face in confusion, he somehow sat up. His startled eyes looked down at his now, human legs that were covered in light gray khaki pants. His eyes slowly traveled from his legs to his arms, to his torso, and then finally back to his legs. Slowly, his human hands fingered the gray jacket that was worn over a red-striped black sweater. What is this? He thought to himself. Still startled, he stood up. It was hard to balance, but he got the hang of it soon as he waddled around on new legs. He stumbled through the forest, trying to get to a lake, a pond, a stream… Somewhere he could see his reflection.

Finally, he appeared into a clearing and in the middle was what he was seeking for, a crystal clear pool of water. Ever so slowly, he stepped forward and knelt down, peering into the watery depths below.

The young face of a human boy, about fourteen, stared back up at him. Scarlet eyes were wild with confusion and his messy blonde hair blew in the gentle breeze that caressed the forest.

Giratina began to shake his head in disbelief. This was not happening…

“No… No…” He whispered. Suddenly, he threw his head back and roared in rage at the sky, a true dragon’s roar. Gritting his teeth in anger, he stood up straight and paced around the pool in confusion. How could this be? It was impossible… But, here he was, Giratina in the flesh, but in now human flesh. He pinched himself to make sure it wasn’t a dream, nothing happened however. He tried to make a portal somehow by opening his mouth and blowing out air, or putting out his hand and concentrating. Still, nothing happened. Giratina was distraught. What if he stayed like this forever? He needed to keep the Reverse World in balance, or else…

He stopped pacing and looked into his reflection for a bit. He didn’t look half bad he had to admit, but still… He wanted to be able to fly again, go into the Reverse World, and many more things… Now, it was all gone…



A few miles away, Lake Valor glistened beautifully on calm waters. It reflected the sky perfectly, making only a rare ripple.

More wind blew, ruffling the airy pink shirt that a girl wore. This girl was kneeling beside the great lake, staring at her reflection in confusion. Her magenta eyes gleamed with something more than her stunning beauty, and her pink hair flew gently in the breeze. A giant purple bow that was adorned on top of her head kept slipping into her eyes. She brushed it away with a small pale hand and continued to stare at herself.

Slowly, one of her hands was brought to her cheek, “Mew?” She mumbled in confusion, then touched her other cheek with her other hand. “I’m human?”

The girl immediately stood up straight. This was not happening… How could she be human? She was a Pokemon! A Legendary at that… How would she ever turn back? She sighed in loss as she remembered who she really was. She was Mew, the ancestor of all Pokemon, and also considered the strongest, although Mew didn’t really think so, not in this weak human form.

Suddenly, the bushes rustled behind her and she whipped out her hands in front of her so she could- wait, she was a human now, she couldn’t use her powers! She slowly dropped them to her waist as a young boy walked out. He wore a giant yellow straw hat with a white t-shirt and tan shorts. A net was hung over his shoulder and a Turtwig was walking by his side. He seemed to be looking for something.

“Jesus Christ, where the hell did that damn Caterpie go?” He mumbled, scratching his head.

He looked up and met the eyes of a confused, beautiful young girl. He immediately began to blush in embarrassment and awe of her beauty.

“Excuse my fool language, miss.” He stammered. His Turtwig bumped into his leg. “Oops, I mean foul language.” He said, blushing even more.

Mew began to laugh at his clumsiness, and despite the boy’s embarrassment, he smiled too.

“I’m Matty, a bug catcher. As you can see I lost the Caterpie I was tracking…”

“If you want a Caterpie, try searching away from the lake, such as in the forest. They’re aren’t many Caterpies at the lake.” Mew told him; even if she was a human she was still a Pokemon at heart!

“Err… Thanks, do you have any Pokemon yourself? You sure seem to know a lot about them, oh and what’s your name?”

Mew paused for a second. What should she tell him, that she was the Legendary Pokemon, Mew? He would definitely not believe her!

“Umm… I’m Kisara…” She said quickly, thinking of the first thing that popped in her head. She actually liked it. “And, no I don’t have any Pokemon.” She added wistfully. She didn’t know anything about being a Trainer.

“Well that’s strange… Considering you know so much about Pokemon… Hmm…” Matty thought the situation over, “It’s alright; I’ll teach you about Pokemon, no sweat.”

“You will?” Asked Mew, suddenly jumpy, “Oh thank you!”
She threw her arms around Matty in pure joy, and he began to blush even harder.

“O-o-k, first w-we n-need to g-get to the n-nearest t-town…”



Lugia frantically was looking around, uncertain of what happened to him. Instead of wings, he had hands, and instead of webbed feet, he wore white human sneakers. He didn’t like where this was going, not one bit… He ran around in circles in the meadow where he was. Floaroma Meadow to be exact.

Blue eyes, flashed around at the colorful flowers in front of him, some people would deem peaceful and beautiful, but not Lugia. No, he felt as if everything was his enemy as they had turned him into a human. He didn’t want to be a human, not right now…

As his eyes flashed around, he finally spotted an opening to an area. He quickly walked in and noticed many people gathering around buildings, a town maybe? Lugia quickly walked into the main area of town and looked around for something to do or something to tell him how this happened. Although we all know nothing good can come from a Legendary that just turned into a human when they wander around a human town…



Latios fidgeted in his sleep. He could hear voices in front of him and suddenly, they became clear.

“Um, hello? Wake up sleepy-head!” A bright and feminine voice spoke, hinted with some laughter.

Latios smelled the sweet scent of blossoming berry flowers, which were soon overcome by handfuls of heavy-scented perfume. Choking on it, Latios flashed his eyes open and jerked up, breathing hard.

“O-M-G your awake!”

Latios looked up to see a longhaired beach-blonde girl with large green-gray eyes. She looked around fourteen or fifteen, and was wearing a sleeveless black shirt with red flare pants. Black highlights were laced into her sunlight colored hair and she twirled some strands around her long-nailed fingers that were painted over with jet-black nail polish.

“So, like, who are you?” She asked him, winking her black mascara and eyeliner eyelashes at him. Latios blinked in surprise, his Pokemon mind not knowing that this stranger was hitting on him. He got up, wondering why the Hell this girl was talking to a Legendary like that. He soon found out for he tripped over his own legs.

“Clumsy, are we?” The girl said, giggling madly. Latios’s deep blue eyes flashed in anger, but he forced himself to keep his cool. He got up once again and stumbled forward, the blonde following.

“So, like, are you, like, a Trainer?” She asked, blinking her large eyes excessively.

Annoyed by her scent and “likes”, Latios finally snapped, “Were is Latias?” He demanded.

The girl stepped back, hurt. “What are you talking about?” Her eyes flashed with a slight fear, but Latios ignored it. All he really cared right now was about his sister. “Where is she!?” He barked again. The model, gave no answer however and Latios stomped off into the woods to find his sister.

“Um… I’m Candi!” She called as he walked away.

Latios whirled around, blue eyes threatening. “Like I’d need to know.”



“Oh wow!” Lugia said, his eyes shining at the sight of everything in the PokeMart, “This stuff is so cool!”

Acting like a five-year old in a candy shop, Lugia explored all the shelves with so much giddiness, most people thought he would burst.

“Look, kid, are you going to buy anything?” The cashier asked behind the checkout counter, looking at Lugia expectantly.

Lugia looked at him, confused, “Buy?”

“Yeah, you know; pay for something so you can have it.”

“Oh, well then yes!”

Grabbing a Great Ball and a Mudkip PokeDoll, he presented it to the cashier.

“Okay, your total is 8600 PokeDollars.” The cashier said, ringing up his items.

Lugia frowned at him, eyes large and crestfallen, “I don’t have any money.”

“Well then how do expect to buy all these things?”

Lugia thought it over, “For free?”

The cashier sighed and shook his head, “I don’t think so, son.” With that, he scooped up the items and placed them back on their proper shelves.



Latios entered the PokeMart in Floroama Town, bummed that he couldn’t find Latias anywhere in the surrounding area, nor the forest. As he slowly walked in, his attention was brought to the argument going on at the checkout counter, the people waiting in line expectantly waiting for the talking to stop. Some people were so fed up with waiting, they got out of the line and placed the items they wanted back onto the shelf and left.

Latios watched as the boy that was arguing with the cashier beg the man not to charge him.

“I’m sorry sir, but I don’t have 8600 PokeDollars. Please just let me have them!”

Latios blinked, then pulled out something crumpled and papery from his jeans pocket. A Trainer had given that to him after he had beat up their Mankey in a battle (He didn’t necessarily know what a “battle” was, and assuming he was part Pokemon and it had to do with Pokemon, he fought with his bare hands.) The Trainer had told him it was 12000 PokeDollars…

“I’ll buy them for you.” He said aloud.

“What?” Asked both the cashier and the boy, turning their heads toward him. Even the people waiting in line stared at Latios in puzzlement.

“Here.” He said, placing the money on the counter, ignoring the many stares he was receiving.

The cashier blinked, then shrugged. It was the guy’s choice.

“Here’s your change, have a nice day.” He said, putting the items Lugia wanted into a plastic bag and handing it to him.

With that, Latios walked back out of the PokeMart, wondering where he should look for Latias next. He was stopped however, as the boy from before began to run after him, shouting to catch his attention.

“Wait, sir! Sir!”

Latios stopped and waited for him to catch up, his eyebrows raised a small bit into his forehead, causing small wrinkles.

Breathless, the boy said, “I just wanted to say thank you for buying these things for me.”

Latios unnerved, replied, “It was no problem, you’re welcome.”

As he turned around, he finally began to think of the gaze between him and the boy… The way his light blue eyes sparkled in the light, like sunlight glinting on the waves of an ocean. Hmm… Ocean, that also reminded him of something…

It soon hit him.

He turned around again, the boy still looking at him. Latios approached closer, freaking out the boy with his so-called ‘stalker stare’.

“L-lugia?” He stammered in disbelief.

“How do you know my-“ Understanding hit the boy and his sea-blue eyes widened in shock.

“Latios, is it really you?”



Giratina stumbled past various twigs and leaves as he shuffled through the forest. It had been an hour since he discovered what he had become and he slowly knew how to walk on two legs instead of six. It was quite hard actually.

He collapsed onto a clearing, panting hard from his hike. Sweat poured from his brow and stained his already black sweater.

He tilted his head back and saw what made his eyes nearly pop out of his skull. Being upside-down, he couldn’t tell what it was, but it was a beautiful thing. He turned right side up and opened his mouth a little in surprise.

It was a human girl. Long, wavy scarlet hair covered her white cloth robe. This robe was like what a Buddhist monk would wear. She had a headdress; much reminding Giratina of an Indian chief except it was much, much smaller. It was of long, yellow feathers that curled over her pale, pretty face. A red shall was draped over her shoulder, down to her waist. Brown sandals adjourned her feet, giving her an almost Japanese look to her.

Giratina just scanned her beautiful body with wide, shocked eyes. She was so gorgeous… So… Sexy. Giratina had never thought this about a human girl before, but then again he was a Pokemon.

He reached out to touch her, possibly waking her up from her nap or whatever she was doing asleep. He did touch her, right on the cheek. He was surprised, the skin felt so soft… He put his whole palm on her cheek, trying his best to not wake her up, he didn’t even know why he was reacting like this, and it was just this girl… Her beauty was enchanting to a young fellow such as Giratina; it was hard not to touch her. His red eyes gazed longingly at her plump, pink lips. Slowly, he found himself leaning forward, his own lips puckered, ready to… to…!

The girl’s eyes flashed open, a fiery red color. Giratina almost jumped out of his clothes as she awakened, but he just stayed right where he was, lips puckered and eyes wider than usual.

At first, she didn’t seem to understand anything, then her face got as red as her hair and she clenched her teeth together tightly and yell-

“You pervert!”

There was a flash of light and Giratina found himself hitting a tree trunk all the way across the clearing.

“What the…?” He started, staring at the girl who was now standing on her two feet, her face still red and bunched up in a snarl of fury. She was pissed.

Giratina blinked as a sudden fiery aura surrounded the human and he knew that this was no ordinary girl.

Then… If she was not a normal human… What was she?

“How dare you!” She hissed, red eyes blazing.

“OK, look, I’m sorry! I just couldn’t help it…”

“Couldn’t help it? My word, yes you could help it.”

Giratina winced. This girl had some spine, although he narrowed his eyes. This girl’s fierce face would be wiped off and replaced with pure terror if he revealed his true self.

But he couldn’t.

He stood up however; a girl would never torment him. If he had to fight, he would give it all he would.

“Hmph… I see you’re a brave little kid… Listen here, I don’t want to fight you, I just want to get your ass out of my way…” She growled, hands on her hips.

Giratina frowned, “I’m not a little kid!” He protested, beginning to blush. There was no way this human would ever call him a ‘little kid’.

The girl just snorted however and waved a dismissive hand, “Oh please… Look at you! Your voice isn’t deep enough for a man’s and besides, your small and meek, an adult is much more burly.” She informed, “now, if you’ll excuse me…” She pushed past Giratina with a shove that almost sent him back into the dirt again.

Giratina stumbled, fuming. This girl was outsmarting him. Him! A Legendary! Growling he grabbed her hand as she was just disappearing into the undergrowth.

She whirled around on him, a fiery gaze in her eyes.

“Don’t touch me!” She snarled, and tried to yank off Giratina’s hand, but he held her firmly, gritting his teeth.

“Who do you think you are?”

“Who do I think I am? Turn it around, buffoon!”

“Yeah, you heard me right! Outsmarting a Pokemon…”

The girl stopped struggling and gazed wide-eyed at Giratina. He smirked at this; finally he had caught her attention.

“P-Pokemon?” She echoed, her voice shaky.

“Not just any Pokemon, I’m Giratina! Ruler of parallel dimensions!” He exclaimed, smiling even wider.

The girl’s hand slipped from his and she stepped back until she hit the trunk of a tree. “No way… Because, I’m Ho-Oh!” She gasped.

Giratina stood there, dumbfounded. “Ho-Oh? Really?” He began to laugh, “Who do you think I’m fooling? You’re not Ho-Oh! Wow… That’s hilarious!”

The girl watched with wide eyes as Giratina began to roll on the ground, laughing hard. The girl didn’t like this, not one bit.

“I am! Oh, will you shut up and listen to me?” Giratina stopped rolling around like a pill bug that was protecting itself and faced the girl, still having a slight smirk on his face.

“What’s your proof?” He asked.

“My proof? Just sit and watch!” The girl answered and threw her hand up in the air, palm wide open. Fire glowed in her hand and was released, shooting into the air like a firework and back down again where it burst into flame and vanished as it hit the ground.

“Okay… Maybe that proves you’re a Pokemon but not Ho-Oh.

“Oh, really?” She retorted with a sniff of disapproval and walked over to a sliver of sunlight that was peeking through the dense trees.

She stepped into the sunlight and immediately, rainbows danced off her robe and shined among the brush.

Giratina stared in awe at the pretty colors. He then gazed upon the girl he once thought was a mortal girl, but now he knew the truth.

“You see?” Ho-Oh said, folding her arm across her chest, eyes narrowed to slits.

Giratina made one small nod before turning back into the trees. He really didn’t want to mess with Ho-Oh anymore; he just wanted to find out how he became human.

“Oh please…” He heard Ho-Oh growl behind him and before he knew it, his shoulders were grabbed and he was dragged back to facing the Rainbow Pokemon.

“What?” He asked rudely, annoyed by Ho-Oh’s attempt to distract him.

“If you’re Giratina, you might as well travel with me.”

“Travel with you? I’d rather go to Hell and burn for all eternity!” He snapped, voice laced with slight sarcasm, but it was the slight truth. He hated Ho-Oh.

Ho-Oh didn’t even flinch, “It doesn’t matter, your coming with me anyway!”

“Why do I have to?”

“Don’t you want to know how you turned into this?” Ho-Oh said, pointing towards herself as if to motion she was human.

“Yeah, but… Not with you!” Giratina replied.

“Look, I know you’re a loner and all, but isn’t it strange how we’re the only Pokemon affected while the others aren’t? Even more stranger is how we’re both Legendaries. Think of it!”

Giratina thought, and he did think Ho-Oh made some sense. And, weren’t two heads better than one?

“Fine… I’ll go with you… Just don’t bitch out on me like before!” Giratina agreed, but only halfheartedly.

“Who was being a bitch?” Ho-Oh replied with a toss of her wavy hair. She marched off into the woods, Giratina following slowly behind her, face screwed up in a scowl.

Oh man… Why did I have to get myself into this? Curse you, hormones… He thought, his scowl deepening.


***​


Latios blinked again.

“So, it really is you?” Lugia inquired, his head cocked to one side.

Latios nodded. “Yes, yes it is.”

Lugia grinned widely, “Oh, that’s amazing! I’m so glad I found you!” He exclaimed, but his smile was soon wiped off his face and being young, he couldn’t take the miracle and broke down crying right in front of Latios.

Feeling sympathetic, he kneeled down beside Lugia and began to pat his back comfortingly. “There, there…” He cooed, ruffling Lugia’s baby blue hair, “We’re Okay.”

Sniffling, Lugia pulled himself together and looked back up with bewilderment flashing wildly in his eyes, “How will we ever change back? Where are the others? Are they alright too?” His questions streamed out of his mouth like a waterfall, making Latios want to lean over and tape his mouth shut with duct tape.

He finally answered, “I’m not sure where the others are, but we’ll find them, I have yet to find Latias, but for now,” he continued, flicking his wrist, “we’re going to survive like this.”

“But, what of someone asks what our names are? We can’t tell them we’re Legendaries disguised as humans…”

“Hmm… I propose if anyone asks, we’ll just tell them a made-up name! Let’s make up one right now just in case. Hmm… I got it! You can be Shiraishi and I’ll be-“

“Shusuke!” Lugia clapped a hand over his mouth as he shouted out a random name for Latios. He chuckled a bit at the youth, “All right then.”

“Awesome! Hey, can I have a nickname? My name sounds kinda long…” Lugia asked.

“Knock yourself out.” Latios answered with a small smirk.

“Okay! Um… It’ll be Rai! Or maybe Rai-Rai…” Lugia began to flap his arms in excitement while running around in circles at his new name. Once flustered and confused, he now seemed pretty confident.

“OK, I can see you’re happy, let’s look around a bit more then rest…” Latios marched into the heart of the town. He looked around at the scenery a bit before moving along. “Hmm… Flowery… Must be Floaroma Town.” He examined.

With that, he walked away from the now hyper Guardian of the Sea who had stopped running around in circles. He swayed on his feet as dizziness overcame him. Shaking his head to get rid of it all, he saw Latios far ahead of him and raced after the Eon Pokemon.

“Hey, wait up!”


***​


“Man… Huff… How can you… Huff, huff… Go this far and so fast?” Matty tried to catch his breath as Mew trudged on ahead to Floaroma, head held high.

“The lake is so far away… Why did you want to come here?”

She whirled around, a flash of cheerfulness in her magenta irises. “Because I love the flowers here! And the smell… Isn’t it wonderful?” She smirked cheekily, twirling around on her toes.

Matty smiled and blushed, she was too cute to argue with. He just calmly followed along.

Mew lifted her head to breathe in the heavy scented flowers that made her nose tingle with happiness. She closed her eyes in contentment as she twirled around, inhaling the aroma of the town.

As she opened them again to see where she was and if Matty was still following, her eyes slowly met the gaze of the indigo eyes that belonged to Lugia…


Lugia’s gaze connected with that of the strange girl’s and he opened his mouth a bit in surprise. Was that who he thought it was?

“Latios, you can go ahead, I’ll catch up to you later.” With that, Lugia took off running towards the girl.

“OK, hey, wait, what’s wrong? Why are you running so fast?” He called after the sprinting Diving Pokemon, but he was already out of sight.

Damn kids… Think they can go anywhere anytime… Latios thought with a small frown and dashed off after Lugia.

Meanwhile, Lugia was greeting the girl with the pink hair, saying how sorry he was to bother her. “It’s just, you looked so familiar, and like someone I know!” He explained.

The girl just laughed, seemingly understanding what Lugia was hinting at. “It’s alright, Lugia, I knew who you were once I saw your ocean blue eyes.”

Lugia took a step back, surprised. “How…?”

“I’m not stupid, you know, I mean, I’m Mew aren’t I?”

“Aha! So you are Mew… I thought so…” Lugia exclaimed.

Just then, Latios came staggering up the hill to get Lugia, and he saw him talking to Mew. Thinking she was just a normal human, he called, “Lu- I mean, Shiraishi! Don’t bother other people!”

Latios grabbed Lugia’s arm and dragged him to his chest, squishing the air out of his lungs. “Heh heh, sorry about my little brother, he can be a bit curious of other people. We’ll just be on our way…” As Latios was apologizing, Lugia was struggling against his grasp thinking, Little brother…? Really?

Mew giggled, “Oh Latios, don’t you know who I am?”

Latios let go of Lugia and he stumbled onto the ground, deeply inhaling the air that he had lost.

“Mew?” Latios said, dumbfounded. Mew nodded with a smart smirk making Lugia and Latios feel as if a girl had outsmarted them.


Meanwhile, our bug catcher, Matty, was having trouble climbing up the hill to Floaroma Town. He stumbled into a large puddle of mud just as he was reaching the top and, because he was now slick with the sticky brown stuff; he slid back down the hill.

Why…? Why do I even try? He thought, out of breath.


“Ugh… You didn’t have to drag me all the way over to Floaroma Town just to see some stupid flowers!” Giratina hissed as they walked along the dirt trail to the flowery haven just ahead.

“Oh come on… Don’t you think this place is beautiful? And we may find something here, you never know.” Ho-Oh answered with a cheery grin. Giratina’s frown lengthened.

The two followed along the trail, Ho-Oh humming a song with her beautiful voice. Giratina wasn’t enjoying the nice day however; he was lost in his own dark world. He still didn’t know why he had agreed to follow her. Ever since they had set off, she had been a pain in Giratina’s butt. All she ever talked about was happiness, rainbows, and sunshine, something Giratina despised.

“Ho-Oh, where are we going?” He asked suddenly.

“To look around for something that may help us, or something magical that can take us back… Ah! Let’s ask those people over there.” And Ho-Oh was off, skipping delightfully on her high heels. Giratina was surprised she didn’t twist an ankle from so much skipping on sandals (He made another frown, for he wanted her to twist her ankle).

Giratina could only follow solemnly behind.

He soon caught up with her and she was already talking to the people.

“Sorry to bother you, but my buddy Kage and I would like to wonder if there are any places of interest here, something that makes the town stand out from others?” She asked.

Giratina hissed. What kind of name was Kage? Oh yeah, he knew it meant shadow in Japanese, but, really…?

The dark blue haired boy looked at Ho-Oh. “Sorry ma’am, but we’re not tour guides.”

Ho-Oh tipped her head to her right side. “But, you’re citizens of this town, correct? You at least should know about your town’s hot spots.”

“Uh… We’re just visiting actually.” The blue haired boy replied.

Giratina narrowed his eyes. The boy seemed pretty uncertain of what to say, as if he wasn’t telling the whole truth.

“Oh, OK then, sorry to bother you! We’ll just be on our way.” Ho-Oh apologized and turned around to look for someone else to talk to. Giratina followed behind her, that is, until he heard a shout behind him.

He turned around and saw a pink-haired girl, no less than twelve, running towards them, magenta eyes sparkling. She had been with the blue-haired boy.

“Wait!” She called.

Giratina stopped, but Ho-Oh continued onwards. He didn’t care though because the girl seemed to want to talk to him more.

Breathless, the girl continued, “You’re… Giratina… Aren’t you?” She panted.

Giratina was shocked, “How do you know that?” He demanded.

The girl stared at him through her captivating eyes, “You sure do look like him, red eyes, blonde hair that resembles his head armor, and your clothes match what his body looks like.” She explained. Giratina was impressed.

“So… Is that all you wanted to tell me?” He asked.

The girl shook her head and made a small giggle, “Oh no, silly! I wanted to tell you that I’m a Legendary Pokemon too! Me and those two boys over there.”

“What? Really? Because the girl I was with is a Legendary also! She’s Ho-Oh.”

“I thought so… She reminded me of her… Can you call her back?”

Giratina nodded and rushed off after her. Ho-Oh was just over a small rise once he caught up to her.

“Well your noticeably happier…” She said, narrowing her eyes.

“Ho-Oh, you won’t believe what I found out! C’mon, follow me!” He took her hand and rushed back off towards the other human Pokemon.

“Giratina, what is it?” Ho-Oh asked, doing her best to make sure her feet were catching up with Giratina’s.

“You’ll find out when you get there, all I can say is that someone wants to see you…”


In the outskirts of the flowery town, a group of three humans moved along casually, stopping at times to chat.

The red-haired girl clung tightly to the purple-headed boy’s arm, tired and hungry. They were all tired and hungry.

Well, except for the third one who was proudly strolling through the fields of colorful flowers, not a care in the world.

“Dialga, do you even know where you’re going?” The purple-headed boy asked from behind.

The boy named Dialga turned around, his large silver helmet almost falling off from the hard swivel of his head revealing his short and scruffy blue hair.

“Feh, desist, I know exactly where I’m going.” He then turned around; eyes closed and head high. That was until he hit a pole.

The boy and girl slapped themselves in the forehead. Dialga was so clumsy all. The. Time.

Dialga say up, rubbing his newly bruised head and continued on without another look back. He came up to a woman and tapped her on the shoulder, noticeably looking more like a freak than the other two.

“Excuse me, ma’am, can you direct me to the nearest Pokemon Center?” He asked. The woman stared at him with wide-eyes before hurrying away, mumbling something threatening under her breath.

“Peasant!” Dialga shouted after her.

The girl sighed, “We’re never going to be normal again are we?” She asked.

The boy growled, “Not with him in charge.”

Dialga tried and failed to tag down some other people. At last, he let a huge roar, “Damn those idiotic humans!” He spat and placed his hands on his hips, standing before the others.

“The only idiot here is you!” The boy hissed, striding up to him. “The Pokemon Center is over there! It even says so on that big, lit-up sign!”

“Hold your tongue you incomprehensible fool. I expect ignorance from humans, but you know who I am and thus I demand respect!” He replied rather proudly and walked on towards the Pokemon Center.

“Heh, I demand some respect too!” The boy shouted after him.

Dialga whirled around, “Oh yes, I should bow down to you, Mewtwo because you’re the first Pokemon ever cloned.”

Mewtwo seemed to have his feathers ruffled at this, “You take that back!” But, Dialga was already strolling to the Center, head still held high until he hit the glass door.

Mewtwo rubbed his temples and the girl sighed.

“Do you think Latios is here?” She suddenly asked.

“If your brother was smart, Latias, he wouldn’t come anywhere near this place.” He replied, following Dialga into the Center after he got up from his fall.


Another update? YES.
 
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Re: Time for Change {PG-13, Part 1 of part 1 is up {lol}}

Nice!
Huge vocabulary, great description and interesting characters make one heck of a part one! You have a lot of potential and this story has a great plot.
But one thing, You can't use "OMG" thats internet slang not a word, therefore its invalid.

Great job! I'd love to see the rest, don't dare take too long.
 
Re: Time for Change {PG-13, Part 1 of part 1 is up {lol}}

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when i read this my first thought was damn i wish i had thought of this first
:p
The only reservation i had, is wouldn't the legendaries be a bit more shocked they were human? rather than say, going shopping?
 
Re: Time for Change {PG-13, Part 1 of part 1 is up {lol}}

@Thabet: But that just describes the blonde's character DX. Lol...

@Some colour no doubt:
You can't really say he was going shopping he was exploring. But then again, your right. :p
 
Re: Time for Change {PG-13, new update!}

Ugh, what happened? This story was so popularrrrr.... D: Anyway...

Dear Time for Change Fans,

I've made a blog consisting of updating about all my writing works, so fans out there this is your chance to get to know me better and maybe even read even more of my works! I hope you enjoy my blog posts and maybe even leave some feedback.

Sincerely your friendly neighborhood,
Shiny Ninetales
 
Re: Time for Change {PG-13, Update; added more to prologue}

Added something extra to the prologue! :D Enjoy! By the way, more of part 1 is still in production, I am almost finished though!
 
Re: Time for Change {PG-13, Update; added more to prologue}

The prologue was fantastic with the Ecruteak Towers legend morphed into a more contemporary tale of love, scandal and deciet (and plenty more of course). Part One was also good although sometimes repetitive; however that was probably necessary. Overall, the story is terrific, with a fine plot and wide vocabulary; I'll look out for further writing. :)
 
Re: Time for Change {PG-13, Update; added more to prologue}

Aha, thank you :3 I wasn't sure how people would take the Ecruteak thing xD. I thought it was interesting though, so I decided to do it.
 
Re: Time for Change {PG-13, Update; added more to prologue}

A little note about Time for Change:

I haven't been here in a long time, haven't posted much updates, etc... And because of the problems with Razayka and all that, I cannot do much for this fan-fiction. So, as of now, the Time for Change project is halted until further notice.

I am however still accepting reviews and comments for those who want to comment on the prologue and part 1 of part 1.

Thanks for reading!
Kotaku no aru Kyukon

P.S I may start this project up again sometime in April or May, but it is still uncertain what exact date this will start up again.
 
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