Torterra's Sprites!

[torterra2010]

hi! Please c+c for what you're about to see!
Here's my sprites!

Enjoy! PLEASE DO NOT USE THESE!​

 

[Flame_]

those look good

 

[Dragoon Rider]

Those are good. :thumbup:

 

[torterra2010]

Thanks! These are improved ones!

 

[Aiere]

*is impressed*
Very nice.

 

[torterra2010]

thanks!

 

[NyaChan]

Okay, well, you asked for C&C, so while I might look like the asshole here, I do have suggestions that aren't just "it's pretty" or whatever.

Damon: Is that a pocket on his shirt? It looks a little too darkly outlined, and looks a little big. Otherwise, well done.
Keliani: I like her (?) design. Her hair could use a bit more shading though.
Alora: Urk, her skirt. It really looks bad. The shading is done all wrong, plus the light source of the base trainer you used it on the RIGHT while you shaded the clothing as if it's to the LEFT.
Spark: Is he, like, part robot/steel? The line splitting his face looks rather odd.
Wanda: Aside from the fact her shoes blend into her feet, I like her.
Rocio: Her hat REALLY should be a different color, it looks more like a growth on her head under her hair until I look closely. Her shirt needs better shading, plus those three red dots stand out too much. Also the end of her shirt looks odd, it shouldn't 'fly' out that much.
Baron: another case of hair needs more shading, but otherwise well done.
Gregory: His jacket looks very unshaded.
Fisty: His shirt looks rather tight, and the pants look like they need some shading. Also, the face's light source is to the RIGHT, while you shaded the shirt like it's to the LEFT.
Nicki: Besides the white jacket's outlines looking rather light, she's very nice.
Stephan: His baggy shirt is very nicely done, though the outlines for it could be a bit darker.
Electra: First, please don't write her name in Yellow. @_@ *had to squint* The edge of her shirt looks a bit funny in the shading department, but otherwise she's my favorite of the bunch.
Hiroshi: The cape, omg the cape. It looks particularly horrible. Try looking at Lance's for a way to make it look better. Again your white objects (The hair mostly) need darker outlines. Also, I would hide the Red/Blue split in the cap behind his leg with the white pant leg instead of showing it between his legs, it just looks like an odd line comparing it to the way the cape it flowing.

Hope this helps and that I didn't sound too mean! ^^;;>

 

[Moonlight Umbreon]

You could ask someone to make trainer cards of these guys.So we could see their speciality.

 

[torterra2010]

ok..........
So here is the updated sprites:

Please C+C!
Oh,NyaChan,Spark has a mask for some reason i have to make up a story for it...