Trainers Quest-Adventures in Hoenn

[Miles Prower]

This is a quest of a Trainer in Hoenn. His name, Nathan. His family re-located to Hoenn, and Nathan is finally old enough to be a Trainer. He moved to Litleroot, which is close to a Pokemon Lab. The following is his quest through out Hoenn, his quest to be a Champion.

~Prolouge~

Its a lovley day in Littleroot Town. Nathan was walking out of his house, heading for the Pokemon Lab. Today is the day he becomes a trainer.

Nathan walked in the lab. There were three Pokeballs on a Table. Nathan looked around, but saw no one. "Hello, anybody here?" Nathan asked.

"Why hello!" came a voice from behind. Nathan turned and say a Professor. "I am Professor Birch. So, are you the person here for the Pokemon?" He asked.

Nathan nodded. "Yes, I would like a Pokemon." He told the professor eagerly.

"The Pokemon are on that table over there, choose which one you would like." He said, walking over to the table. He pointed at each Pokeball. "Torchic, Mudkip, and Treeko...choose your pick." He told him.

Nathan walked over to the Table, and looked at each Pokeball. Then he picked up the Pokeballs contaning Torchick and Mudkip. "Hmmm, fire, or water...." He said to himself. After some hard thinking, he finally made his decision. "Ill take Torchick..." He said, putting Mudkip down.

"Okay! Now that you have a Pokemon, I will give you two other things." He said, walking over to a table. "Lets see, Five Pokeballs, and...." He gave Nathan a Red Square like thing.

"Whats this?" He said, taking the Square-ish thing.

"Its called a Pokedex, it records data of pokemon you see and catch. Its better than remembering the pokemon by sight. " He told him. "Now, youre about to meet new Pokemon, rivals, and even friends. So go, embark on a journey like never before, and enjoy the wonderful world of Hoenn!" He told him.

"Thanks!" Nathan said, running out of the lab, and towards his House. "This is gonna be great! I gotta tell mom about this!" He said, as he ran home for dinner.

 

[Miles Prower]

Okay...this is the real story now. Please comment!

Chp. 1- Another New Adventure Begins!

Its another Beautiful day in Hoenn. This is the day Nathan starts his journey. He has everything he needs packed into his bookbag, and is ready to go. His mother is downstairs, making breakfast before her son goes on his adventure!

Nathan comes walking down the stairs, and walks to the table. He sits down as his mom is bringing his food. "Wow, never thought I could get to sleep last night! I was very excited."

His mom sat down with her breakfast. "Well you better eat up, got a long journey ahead of you." She said, as she started to eat her eggs.

"Dont worry mom, I would never turn down your cooking!" He said, as he chowed down his homemade pancakes. "This is gonne be one thing I will miss while I am journeying through Hoenn!" He said, finishing the last of his Pancakes.

"Well, there are good places to eat throughout Hoenn. Anyways, anything else you want before you leave?" His mom asked, taking the plates and putting them in the sink.

"No mom, im good." He told her, as he went to grab his bags. Then he walked up and kissed his mom on the cheek. "Guess I should go now." He said, as he started to walk out

"Be careful! Dont forget to call sometimes, love you!" She called after him.

"Love you too mom, Bye!" He yelled back, as he shut the door and ran off. His journey as a trainer has just begun!

Sorry for cutting it short....there will be more longer chapters when the story progresses!

 

[Abstractwatercolor]

Nice job, Shaymin. Seems interesting so far.

 

[SSJ3_Raditz]

We could use some more backstory. Like, what does Nathan look like? Why did he choose to be a trainer? How old is he? etc.

BTW, there are some spelling mistakes. Like in the prologue, you spelled Torchic as Torchick, which is wrong.

But whatever, it looks good.

 

[Miles Prower]

Well, I guess I can add that part in. But he Has Blue Jeans, wears a red shirt and a blue jacket. He has brown hair, blue eyes, and wears a Red hat, and has sunglasses on the hat's bill.

Ch. 2- The first one is always a charmer

After a long walk, Nathan sat down on a log that was sitting next to the river and decided top pull out the bottle of water he had packed for the trip.

"Hmm, this place is pretty nice for a region ive never been to." He said as he reached down to get his water ffrom the backpack. Suddenly, Nathan's log started to roll back. The next thing Nathan knew, he landed in the river, his clothes soaking wet. He looked up and saw that a Poochyena had pushed his log over. Nathan reached for his we pokebelt, and grabbed his Torchic ball, then threw it in front of the Poochyena.

"Torchic!" It said, as it poped out of its pokeball.

"Okay Torchic, use Scratch on that Poochyena!" He yelled, as the Poochyena took a fighting stance and growled.

Torchic lunged at Poochyena, and the Poochyena used tackle. However, only Torchic's atack went through. The attack weakened the Poochyena, and Nathan took out his Pokedex. He looked at Poocyena's stats, and saw it was only a lvl. 3, while Torchic was a lvl. 6. Nathan then threw a pokeball at the Poochyena, and it went inside. Then he watched as the Pokeball flashed and shook one...two....three....


"Click" A sound came from the pokeball. It stopped shaking and the light stopped flashing. "Yes! I got my first Pokemon!" He yelled as he walked up to poochyena. "Now lets see, you know Tackle and Growl...meh, I'll gove you some work, and you will know better moves." He said, as he put Poochyena up. Then he turned to Torchic. "Good job buddy." He told it, as he had torchic return. "Well, lets go see what I have up ahead." He told himself, as he walked on to Oldale town to further his adventure.