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I am writing The Real Rise Of Darkrai. It's a story of the Darkrai from The Rise Of Darkrai, who is 'good' in the movie. :bawl: This is him as a villain.

Problem is, I am dead stuck on Chapter 3. I previously wrote almost all of it about a year ago, but it wasn't very dark, it was kiddish. So I gave an attempt at rewriting it. I am busy and can only update it about once a month at best. If you would like to read what I've done so far, go to Fanfiction.net and view it. Also check out the story I am working on now, Shapeshifter. That one is active, I am writing good for that one.

If you have some advice to offer, please do. For either story. Thanks!
 
Could you publish the story here please? And then perhaps give us some specific things you'd like advice on?

As it stands now, your request for advice reads more like an advertisement for your fic. I think we could be of more help if you gave us some examples of what you want help with.

If it's just a general review you want, publish the story at the Writer's Workshop :)
 
What Legacy said. Consider this a warning for advertisement.
 
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