Victory Road (my webcomic)

[Paragon]

This is a webcomic I've recently begun work on called "Victory Road". I wanted to get everyone's opinion on it. Comments are really appreciated, because I really want to know what others think of my comic.

Description:
After his wealthy best friend since childhood is kidnapped and put up for ransom, aspiring Pokemon trainer and Pokemon translator Jason runs away from his overprotective parents to begin his Pokemon journey with his friend Cyndaquil early and save his friend.

Archive

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Chapter 1

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Chapter 1 Page 1

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Chapter 1 Cover

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Chapter 1 Page 2

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Chapter 1 Page 3

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Chapter 1 Page 4

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Chapter 2

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Chapter 2 Cover

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Page 2 Page 1

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Chapter 2 Page 2

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Chapter 2 Page 3

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Chapter 2 Page 4

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Chapter 3

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Chapter 3 Cover

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[ChachachaCHIA!]

cool! You're a good artist I can't draw that well...

 

[Paragon]

cool! You're a good artist I can't draw that well...

Thanks! I really appreciate it! (I'm a good artist?! )

 

[GengarEatBanana]

I can't view it. It says it's an invalid attachment D:

 

[Paragon]

I can't view it. It says it's an invalid attachment D:

Try it again now. You were checking when I was making the change between attachments and links to the images. Sorry about that :/

 

[GengarEatBanana]

Awesome! What region does this take place in?

 

[Paragon]

Awesome! What region does this take place in?

Unova, though the pokemon shown throughout the series will be from all of the regions.

Also, thanks for the compliment!

 

[The Knights of Wario Land]

Great job! You really are pretty talented

 

[Paragon]

Great job! You really are pretty talented

Here I was, thinking I sucked, and people are telling me I'm talented! That means a lot!

 

[GengarEatBanana]

Cyndaquil's gonna pown these noobs

 

[Paragon]

Cyndaquil's gonna pown these noobs

Why is it that you always post when I'm updating? You have terrible timing X3 Did chapter 2 page 1 appear for you?

Also, interesting how you're calling them noobs when this is Jason's first fight XD

 

[GengarEatBanana]

...Jason's epic.

 

[Paragon]

...Jason's epic.

Haha okay, you have a point there XD

 

[ChachachaCHIA!]

Wow, it's been awhile but the comix are getting good each page...

 

[Paragon]

Wow, it's been awhile but the comix are getting good each page...

That's because I'm finally starting to get used to drawing in bulk and from perspectives that I have a hard time with (read: everything but head-on X3). I'm starting to be able to draw faster, too. I'm glad to hear you think I'm improving, I hadn't noticed.

 

[Paragon]

Chapter 2 Cover (changed)

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Chapter 2 Page 3

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Chapter 2 Page 4

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Chapter 3 Cover (previously chapter 2 cover)

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