GoldenrodGOD
Unrivalled Confidence xo
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NOTE: This is my first fanfic, so please don't bite my head off if I make an error or something! Scary! I have a rough idea of what I'm doing, but if I'm doing something wrong, don't...kill me. Thanks and enjoy 
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Chapter One: Happy Birthday Spike!
Sunlight flooded the room as I opened my eyes groggily to sleepily take in my surroundings, as if I didn't see my room every day. I slowly sat up and rubbed the sleep from my eyes, just before the door to my room flew open and hit the wall with a deafening crash.
“HAPPY BIRTHDAY SPIKE!!!”
“Mmm” I mumbled quietly, blinking rapidly, trying to adjust my eyes to the bright sight in front of me
My little sister, Topaz, began hopping up and down and started singing ‘Happy Birthday’, whilst my baby brother, Turquoise, decided to clamber up onto my pathetic excuse of a bed and began gurgling in time with Topaz’s singing.
“Alright kids, that’s enough, leave Sapphire alone now, go get ready for school” My mother shooed Topaz and Turquoise out of my room whilst I cringed at the sound of my proper, birth name. Sapphire. What kind of name was that? Although my nickname, Spike, wasn’t much better and made me sound like the family pet, at least it was a tad more common and a lot less precious than Sapphire.
“Happy birthday, sweetie. I know it’s your birthday, but it’s still a work day and you have to get up. C’mon, the cafe opens in twenty minutes! Have a good day, dear!” My mother kissed me on the cheek before leaving my room in a hurry, in case my siblings had tried to burn down the house within the space of two minutes.
I sighed, and swung my feet out of bed, only to discover Turquoise had left a drool puddle on the floor. I began to get dressed and after ten minutes I was ready. Did I dare look at myself in the mirror?
I peeked into the mirror hanging on the wall, and almost died at what I saw. A heart shaped face, sea-blue almond-shaped eyes, an ordinary nose dashed with freckles, an average-sized mouth and wavy mid-length chocolate-coloured hair. Fine. But...my uniform invented a whole new level of humiliation. A black dress with a skirt so stiff that it looked like it was held in place by a hoop, a white apron and matching doily headdress, and to top it off, a black collar lined with white frills that made me feel more trapped than ever. Unfortunately, it was now 7:45 and far too late to kill myself. I sighed, picked up my bag and went off to work.
It took ten minutes to walk out of Solaceon Town to Route 210, giving me five minutes until the Cafe Cabin opened. I sighed and weakly smiled as the other waitresses wished me happy birthday as I made my way into the kitchen, but I was anything but happy. I took my place on one side of the sink and began to wash the dishes and mugs. On the other side of the sink was Sylvia, happily singing away as she scrubbed the dishes.
“There’s a Ninetails in your closet! Open up and set it freeeeee! Awooooooo!!! There’s a Ninetails in your closet! Let it out so it can brea-oh, hey Spike! Happy birthday!” Sylvia suddenly stopped singing to wish me happy birthday. I sighed and didn’t bother trying to smile.
“Hey, birthday girl, what’s wrong?” Sylvia stopped scrubbing, and studied my face, concerned.
“Oh, nothing. It’s just that...” I took a deep breath before continuing. ‘Do you ever feel like you’re gonna be stuck here forever? Destined to be a milk maid forever, trapped? I’m sixteen and I’ve spent all of my life in Solaceon. I don’t want to be trapped here in Solaceon, Sylvia. There’s nothing here. I’m sick of it. I want to get out, but I just don’t know how...” I trailed off and looked up to meet Sylvia’s gaze, who was frowning and chewing her lip. Oh God. I never should have told her.
“Come meet me outside my house after work” Sylvia said abruptly. I looked up, confused. “Don’t worry, you’ll see, I promise. Now cheer up, Spike! Everything’s gonna be okay!”
I wanted to believe her, but I just didn’t know what to think. Although I was a year older, I was still as confused as ever...
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What do you think so far? Not that bad, right?
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Chapter One: Happy Birthday Spike!
Sunlight flooded the room as I opened my eyes groggily to sleepily take in my surroundings, as if I didn't see my room every day. I slowly sat up and rubbed the sleep from my eyes, just before the door to my room flew open and hit the wall with a deafening crash.
“HAPPY BIRTHDAY SPIKE!!!”
“Mmm” I mumbled quietly, blinking rapidly, trying to adjust my eyes to the bright sight in front of me
My little sister, Topaz, began hopping up and down and started singing ‘Happy Birthday’, whilst my baby brother, Turquoise, decided to clamber up onto my pathetic excuse of a bed and began gurgling in time with Topaz’s singing.
“Alright kids, that’s enough, leave Sapphire alone now, go get ready for school” My mother shooed Topaz and Turquoise out of my room whilst I cringed at the sound of my proper, birth name. Sapphire. What kind of name was that? Although my nickname, Spike, wasn’t much better and made me sound like the family pet, at least it was a tad more common and a lot less precious than Sapphire.
“Happy birthday, sweetie. I know it’s your birthday, but it’s still a work day and you have to get up. C’mon, the cafe opens in twenty minutes! Have a good day, dear!” My mother kissed me on the cheek before leaving my room in a hurry, in case my siblings had tried to burn down the house within the space of two minutes.
I sighed, and swung my feet out of bed, only to discover Turquoise had left a drool puddle on the floor. I began to get dressed and after ten minutes I was ready. Did I dare look at myself in the mirror?
I peeked into the mirror hanging on the wall, and almost died at what I saw. A heart shaped face, sea-blue almond-shaped eyes, an ordinary nose dashed with freckles, an average-sized mouth and wavy mid-length chocolate-coloured hair. Fine. But...my uniform invented a whole new level of humiliation. A black dress with a skirt so stiff that it looked like it was held in place by a hoop, a white apron and matching doily headdress, and to top it off, a black collar lined with white frills that made me feel more trapped than ever. Unfortunately, it was now 7:45 and far too late to kill myself. I sighed, picked up my bag and went off to work.
It took ten minutes to walk out of Solaceon Town to Route 210, giving me five minutes until the Cafe Cabin opened. I sighed and weakly smiled as the other waitresses wished me happy birthday as I made my way into the kitchen, but I was anything but happy. I took my place on one side of the sink and began to wash the dishes and mugs. On the other side of the sink was Sylvia, happily singing away as she scrubbed the dishes.
“There’s a Ninetails in your closet! Open up and set it freeeeee! Awooooooo!!! There’s a Ninetails in your closet! Let it out so it can brea-oh, hey Spike! Happy birthday!” Sylvia suddenly stopped singing to wish me happy birthday. I sighed and didn’t bother trying to smile.
“Hey, birthday girl, what’s wrong?” Sylvia stopped scrubbing, and studied my face, concerned.
“Oh, nothing. It’s just that...” I took a deep breath before continuing. ‘Do you ever feel like you’re gonna be stuck here forever? Destined to be a milk maid forever, trapped? I’m sixteen and I’ve spent all of my life in Solaceon. I don’t want to be trapped here in Solaceon, Sylvia. There’s nothing here. I’m sick of it. I want to get out, but I just don’t know how...” I trailed off and looked up to meet Sylvia’s gaze, who was frowning and chewing her lip. Oh God. I never should have told her.
“Come meet me outside my house after work” Sylvia said abruptly. I looked up, confused. “Don’t worry, you’ll see, I promise. Now cheer up, Spike! Everything’s gonna be okay!”
I wanted to believe her, but I just didn’t know what to think. Although I was a year older, I was still as confused as ever...
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What do you think so far? Not that bad, right?
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