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MC Karkat

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Prologue:Bringing in the evil

It was in the dead of night, a truck sped by.

"Hurry or he'll catch us, you idiot!!" A man in black shouted the driver.

"This is it's top speed, sir." The driver said back.

"Then I have no use for you." The man in black said as he pulled out a pistol.

"Come man, cut me some slack." The driver begged.

"I am." The man said as he shot the driver in the side of his head and pushed him out "I'm driving now." The man in black took the wheel.

"What the-?" The man in black noticed a car beside the truck "It's him." The man tried to run the car off the road but the car sped ahead of the man "NO!!" The man shouted as he crashed the truck "Just... Great." The man in black said as he dragged him self out of the wreck.

"It's over, Zane." A man in a trench coat said 'Your going back to the asylum."

"Oh, your GOOD!" Zane shouted as the man picked him up "How will I ever kill you, Nigma!?!" Zane asked "Where is the fun in fighting the same guy over and over again?"

"Your a psychpath... Thats what makes it interesting." Nigma explained as he threw Zane into the car "You seem to always use more of your brains then the others, your my alter ego, the wild card." Nigma got into the car "And don't try using the other doors, I got child on." Nigma started to drive.

"Your for one hell of a night, Nigma." Zane whispered "Just you wait."
 
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Chapter 1:Entering the asylum

The asylum entrance opened, Nigma entered the asylum dragging Zane in with him "He gave too easly..." Nigma told a guard "What does have planned in that sick mind of his?"

The guards strapped Zane into a wheel chair "OOOOooo..." Zane seemed impressed "The tech in this place is AMAZING!! How is a guy like me supposed to escape?" Zane asked the warden

"Thats a great question." The warden said "You don't escape."

"Oh, why are so mean?" Zane asked as he was pushed to the examination room.

The scan went well and they pushed Zane's wheel chair to the elevator.

"warning, patient 153376 entering for patient interview, shoot to kill permission, granted." The intercom announced.

Nigma, Zane and the guards reached the elevator.

"REPTILE, OLD CHUM, IS THAT YOU!!?!!" Zane asked as a giant lizard walked out from the elevator and looked at Nigma.

"Whats he doing?" A guard asked.

"I've got your scent Nigma.." Reptile said as he continued to his destination.

"That was freaky." A guard said "But everything reptile says is freaky.

Nigma followed the guards and Zane into the elevator.

"Tell me, you've never let me catch you this easly before, what do you have planned?" Nigma asked Zane.

"Nothing really." Zane answered "But I better warn you, I've still got a trick or two up my sleave." Suddenly the elevator stopped and the lights went out.

"Whats he doing?" A guard said in a frightened tone.

Suddenly everything came back on and the elevator continued to going down again and Nigma had Zane by the throat.

"Whats a matter, Nigma?" Zane asked "You can't trust me when the power goes out?"

"That right." Nigma said as he let Zane go and the elevator came a stop and everyone continued on to Patient drop-off.

"I'm sorry, Nigma." A guard stopped Nigma in his tracks "You might disturb some of the more violent patients."

"Okay." Nigma said as he went a control booth "Just as long as Zane is kept in his cell this time."

The guards got Zane out of his wheel chair and into some cuffs.

"This is where happens." Zane whispered "I just can't wait." Zane got his knees.
 
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Chapter 2:Zane escapes!!

"Get up ya loon." A guard demanded as Zane headbutted him and began to strangle him with the handcuffs.

"Hurry Nigma!!" Zane shouted 'We're loosing him!!"

Nigma tried to break through the control booth window as Zane got the keys and freed himself from the cuffs.

"Honey, I'm home." Zane said to the security camera.

"Come right in Zane." The woman in the main security core in heart of the asylum said as he electric gate deactivated and let Zane in.

Nigma jumped through the window as electric gate activated and Zane went into the main control booth across from the booth Nigma jumped out of to chase Zane.

"Oh boy.." Zane was excited "All of my thugs are running free in the asylum now."

Some thugs fell through the air vent.

"Get ready to die, Nigma." one the thugs growled "'Cause we're gonna beat the life out of you." The thug tried to punch Nigma but Nigma countered and twisted the thug's arm and threw him at the other.

"Oh boo!!" Zane shouted "But are coming aways, gotta run." Zane ran out of the room as more thugs emerged from the air vent.

"Heh... Too easy." Nigma said as he fired off his grappling hook at a thug and swung him around at the other thugs.
 
Chapter 3:Sid's captive

Nigma grappled up into the air vent and continued on until he got to the other side of the electric gate.

"Zane never was too bright." Nigma said as he walked down the hallway covered with the blood of some unfortunate guards "Everywhere Zane goes, death is sure to follow."

"He's here!!" A thug shout as he tried to punch Nigma.

Nigma caught the thug's fist and twisted his arm and threw the thug to the ground.

"You.." A thug attempted to kick Nigma but Nigma caught his leg and snapped it then threw the thug to the ground.

Nigma contiued on until he came across some guards.

"Whats going on?" Nigma asked.

"Sid has my friend in the electric chair." A guard said

"You have to save him." Another guard begged.

"If I even HEAR that trench coat wearing sadsack I'll fry this man." Sid made himself clear.

Nigma contiued up the stairs to the balcony.

"This will complicated due to Sid's extreme hearing ability." Nigma said as he grappled to the shandleir above Sid.

"Zane here, just wanting you to know that I will make sure ANY trespasser like a certain little pain in my side for example shall be dealt with in a slow and painful manner." Zane said on the intercom as Nigma dropped down on Sid and knocked him out.

"Now I'm trapped... Or so Zane thinks." Nigma said as he openned an air vent and crawled through it.
 
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