Yeah, I was in a "Satoshi mood"...

Wow, I have a lot of catching up to do as far as critiquing stuff goes. I've been so busy I haven't had much time to do anything. :X

Aww, cute Sato-chan pictures! Well, let's see... Your lineart is very clean and nice, and I *love* his pose on the second one. However, there are some anatomical issues...

First off, on both pictures (though the first more than the second), his head looks a little too big for his body. While in the series, this is also somewhat true, it seems a little exaggerated in your drawings. While in the second drawing, this is minor enough, it looks a little awkward in the first.

On the first picture, his arms look slightly too thick and a little too flexible. This could be fixed quite easily, though, with a little reduction and a more distinct wrist. His smile seems a little too large and lopsided, too, and I can't decide if I like that effect or not. ^^;;

On the second picture, for the most part it looks fine--although his legs look somewhat stiff for some reason. I think the knees should probably be lower down, and... I'm not quite sure exactly what it is that's wrong exactly, but it looks awkward. Clothes wrinkles might help, but I'm obsessed with clothes wrinkles, so I might be biased. XD I love his expression and how you did his arms, though. Cute.

I hope I'm not coming across as harsh at all... You know I love your drawings. I'm just trying to help you improve. ^^;; I think there were a few other things I was going to say, but I can't remember what they were now...
 
Not at all and I do really appreciate the feedback! You can't imagine how many times I erased Ash's smile on the first pic. I didn't seem to come up with a nice one. ^^;
Also, I always have problems with legs and arms, not to mention hands, I'll analize all the things you said when I'm back at home and try to improve the drawings.

Now I'm glad I haven't started cging them. XP
 
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