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Yet another team from Edo-kun

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ShinyFlareon

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Yeah, yeah, I make a lot of teams. Please don't judge me, just my team - I think it's fun to make a bunch of teams! This one's going to be pretty physically-based, just as a warning.

Scizor@Life Orb
Ability: Technician
Adamant nature
EVs: 32 HP / 252 Atk / 224 Spe

-- Swords Dance
-- Bullet Punch
-- Brick Break
-- Quick Attack

Combination lead and Physical powerhouse. Two priority moves boosted by Technician? Sounds good to me. Brick Break to mess up leads trying to set up with Reflect or Light Screen, as well as to deal some pretty good damage, too, especially to the likes of Weavile and Tyranitar.

Linoone@Salac Berry
Ability: Gluttony
Adamant nature
EVs: 108 HP / 252 Atk / 8 Def / 4 SpD / 136 Spe

-- Belly Drum
-- Shadow Claw
-- Dig/
-- Return

Typical Belly Drum Linoone here. Dig helps with steels that don't have Magnet Rise or aren't part Flying, and any switches can be hit with Return. Shadow Claw gets pretty nice coverage with the other two moves.

Crobat@Wide Lens
Timid nature
EVs: 252 HP / 4 SpA / 252 Spe

-- Hypnosis
-- Mean Look
-- U-Turn
-- Air Slash

Another candidate for lead. The basic premise is to get out and let off a quick Hypnosis, with Wide Lens to boost it's accuracy even more, then Mean Look to trap them, and U-turn out to Linoone so it can set up that Belly Drum. Air Slash in case something faster than me Taunts me, or I somehow end up with Crobat as my last pokemon.

Torterra@Leftovers (Riku)
Docile nature
EVs: ???

-- Leech Seed
-- Crunch
-- Earthquake
-- Wood Hammer

Yeah, yeah, I know the first thing out of everyone's mouth: 'Get a better nature! What are you thinking, using a neutral nature?' Well, this guy's served me pretty well, and I'm not about to let him go - this is the only one I'm for sure keeping. Leech Seed and Leftovers help with Wood Hammer damage, while Crunch and Earthquake offer coverage. I haven't actively EV trained him, though, so any suggestions would be welcome (though I'm guessing max attack).

Staraptor@Choice Band (Highwind)
Jolly nature
EVs: 16 HP / 252 Atk / 240 Spe

-- Brave Bird
-- Close Combat
-- Return
-- Pursuit/Aerial Ace

Another pokemon that's served me well. Aerial Ace is a pretty good STAB move for the likes of Breloom and/or Heracross, or when I can't afford to take Brave Bird damage, but Pursuit has it's uses, too.

Azelf@Expert Belt (Eastwood)
Timid nature
EVs: 36 HP / 252 SpA / 220 Spe

-- Nasty Plot
-- Psychic
-- Grass Knot
-- Flamethrower

And now we add the surprise special powerhouse into the mix. Rather standard Nasty Plot set - a shame I couldn't get HP Fighting, but oh well.

So yeah...I'm sure I've got plenty of weaknesses, especially with no walls/healers. But the main premise of this set is to hit fast and hard, scoring as many OHKOs and 2HKOs as possible. However, I realize I am in desperate need of Ice Beam somewhere - I just don't know where. Help is much appreciated!
 
First of all, Scizor doesn't need Quick Attack anymore. Bullet Punch is better 99% of the time. You can replace it with X-Scissor for a good STAB attack, or Roost for more staying power. Linoone should be Jolly. I know you addressed it but I'm going to say it anyway: Torterra needs another nature. You can breed another one from that one, and just keep that one around for in-game uses, y'know. It's not the best user of Leech Seed, so you might want to try some utility instead. This team would do well with Stealth Rock, and Torterra could supply that. Staraptor likes U-Turn a lot.

This team... really doesn't have a lot going for it, when you think about it. Having Scizor and Azelf alone forces you to use this team in OU, and Linoone and Torterra aren't very great in OU.
 
First of all, Scizor doesn't need Quick Attack anymore. Bullet Punch is better 99% of the time. You can replace it with X-Scissor for a good STAB attack, or Roost for more staying power. Linoone should be Jolly. I know you addressed it but I'm going to say it anyway: Torterra needs another nature. You can breed another one from that one, and just keep that one around for in-game uses, y'know. It's not the best user of Leech Seed, so you might want to try some utility instead. This team would do well with Stealth Rock, and Torterra could supply that. Staraptor likes U-Turn a lot.

Well, ok, I'll stick Roost on Scizor, since I've got other Bug-type moves elsewhere (U-turn on Crobat, and I'll stick it on Staraptor as well). As for Torterra, how's this?

Torterra@Leftovers
Impish/Relaxed nature
EVs: 128 HP/ 128 Atk/ 252 Def
-- Earthquake
-- Wood Hammer
-- Stealth Rock
-- Crunch/Stone Edge

Yeah...the EVs will need work. I still really like Leech Seed on this guy, but I suppose Stealth Rock is needed more, as is possibly Stone Edge.

This team... really doesn't have a lot going for it, when you think about it. Having Scizor and Azelf alone forces you to use this team in OU, and Linoone and Torterra aren't very great in OU.

What if I replaced Linoone with a Swords Dance Absol? Or something else - maybe something moderately bulky - that can learn Ice Beam? Perhaps Clefable, Empoleon, Lapras, Lanturn, or Vaporeon? I don't really build teams with specific tiers in mind, as you've probably noticed.
 
I wouldn't suggest replacing Linoone with Swords Dance Absol. I've never been able to get swords dance Absol to work for me with OU pokemon. He pretty much never gets a chance to safely swords dance and get any hits in due to his crappy speed... unless you use sucker punch, but people will see that coming I think.

Empoleon and Vaporeon are nice choices, but I think you'll end up with a serious thunderbolt problem since you already have Crobat and Staraptor (though I'd probably drop Crobat anyway especially if you're dropping Linoone). You listed Clefable, but go with Blissey for bulkiness and ice beam. Clefable should really only be used for things that Blissey can't do.
 
Ah, Blissey. To be honest...I'd rather not. But I suppose if I need some bulk, I might as well go with the best - it certainly helps that it can learn Ice Beam.

Blissey@Leftovers
Calm nature
Natural Cure
EVs: 252 Def / 40 SpA / 216 SpD
-- Aromatherapy
-- Ice Beam
-- Thunderbolt
-- Softboiled/Toxic
 
Clefable gets Ice Beam D:

Yeah, I know, I even have it on one of mine. I just suggested Blissey over Clefable if she wanted a bulky normal type with ice beam. I personally think that if you're going to use Clefable, make it do something Blissey can't (in other words, don't make it a weaker Blissey, if that makes sense).

Is there a reason though that you don't want to use Blissey other than you feel that it is TOO over-used? Because I know what you mean there...
 
Is there a reason though that you don't want to use Blissey other than you feel that it is TOO over-used? Because I know what you mean there...

It's mostly the fact that everyone and their brother uses it, yes. What about a Clefable with Calm Mind, Ice Beam, Flamethrower/Fire Blast, and Thunderbolt or Seismic Toss? I just realized Aromatherapy is an Egg Move on Blissey, anyway, and I don't have anything that knows it.
 
Cresselia's a nice change if you can get your hands on one. I'm restarting Diamond to get a (hopefully) better one and you're welcome to my old one if I do. Mine is Bold with 31 HP but kinda crap defenses... It has Calm Mind and Ice Beam.
 
Cresselia's a nice change if you can get your hands on one. I'm restarting Diamond to get a (hopefully) better one and you're welcome to my old one if I do. Mine is Bold with 31 HP but kinda crap defenses... It has Calm Mind and Ice Beam.

Hm...my Cresselia's Timid, and I don't know it's IVs, yet. Still, I hadn't thought of her - I haven't even touched her since I caught her, so it might work out. If I keep Azelf, though, it's gonna give me a bit of trouble against Dark types, and I have a feeling I'm going to have trouble with Weavile especially and Tyranitar if Scizor bites it, along with things like Drapion. And since I have a lot of good pokemon on my Diamond version, the only way I'd be able to reset for another Cresselia would be to give all the pokemon I want to keep to my friend on her Diamond version, and that's a bit of a hassle. I haven't caught Heatran, though - what if I ran a somewhat bulky set on it? It's defenses aren't bad, provided I keep it away from Earthquakes. Perhaps a Rest+Sleep Talk set?
 
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