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Sorry for the double-post, but i just wanted to update the reader(s) of this fic that it is on an indefinite hiatus. I don't know what to do for chapter 11, so stay tuned, it's not dead!

Hahaha, yeah, i thought that was a funny scene when I wrote it. Glad you thougth so, too. Well, this chapter is a bit confusing. Just bare with me, though. I think it's clear at the end. If you have any questions, post 'em! CHAPTER 10: NEW BEGINNINGS Lucy strolled back into the...

Yeah, it definitely is kinda weird. The obstacle that made it necessary in my mind, though, was the fact that when the miracle stone reacted with them and gave them new abilities, who would know what to call the attack? I don't know, maybe it wasn't necessary. I hope it doesn't make you enjoy...

Thank you so much for reading and enjoying my story, IMJessieTR. It is soooo cool to be able to entertain with this fic. Hopefully you'll stick around longer. It only get's crazier! EDIT: disregard the angry face thing. I don't know where that came from or how to get it off now...

Thanks for reading, IMJESSIETR. Yeah, just a little comic relief, there, lol. CHAPTER 7: FLEETING SERENITY Like a pure maiden suddenly disgraced by the most abrupt and unwelcome of sinful tarnish, the water’s placid surface erupted upon Chris’ contact with it, and ripples were sent out...

Hey! Thanks so much for your continued support, ImJessieTR. And thank you for the review, Barb. Hopefully both of you will stick around for the rest of the adventure. I'm pretty sure you'll be surprised to see where exactly this story is going. Anyway, some nasty computer virus has all but...

Chapter 5 CHAPTER 5: THE JOURNEY BEGINS You didn’t know I could do that, did you? “The Haze? I knew about that, and we are prepared.” Hmm, for your sake, I hope so. “Not for my sake, Theta, but for the sake of everyone.” … The glowing figure disappeared to another region...

Hey! Glad you liked this chapter. The fic continues to be action-packed from here on out. And, I don't know why Entei is such a popular choice to use as a fake/evil pokemon. The Haze can take the form of more than just Entei, though. The next time they meet up with it, it won't be in the...

CHAPTER 4: THE HAZE It had taken most of the day for them to complete their journey through the tall greenery that made up route 111, but finally, they had. Now it was night and the sky was peacefully painted a shade of black by the absence of the sun, only partially illuminated by the full...

CHAPTER 3: EVOLUTION! “If I can’t use electricity, I will become the best at every other type of move!” “And why is that?” the Sneasel questioned. “To become worth something. To be worth capturing and using in tournaments. As I am now, no one looking to win would place me on a...

This is very entertaining. You did a very good job of setting up the mood of the whole story, and it's effective. The only thing that I kept thinking, though, is how this girl is only ten but has such profound thoughts. I don't know, I don't really remember what i thought about when I was...

Thank you so much for reading and replying. I really am very excited about where this story is headed, and I hope you'll stick around and get excited about this story, too! Here's the next chapter. While not the most eventful or lengthy, necessary. It's not even three pages, so please read...

LOST IN THE HAZE CHAPTER 1/PROLOGUE When your power is being abused by those who don’t appreciate you, what do you do? “Here we stand where just moments ago fire fighters struggled to put out this home. The flames have been conquered finally, but the tragedy is not over.” A shot of...