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Well doesn't she say something along the lines of, "Processing data, please try again in 5 mintues?" To me that meant "Close this window and try again in 5 minutes" so I did and it worked xD But whatever, if you don't want to at least try it, don't. xD

I don't know if this has been said yet but.... I'm pretty sure that when Fennel comes up and says "5 minutes" or whatever, you close that window, wait five minutes, then try to get into the dream world again. I did that and got in in around 5 minutes.... So if you have kept Fennel's message on...

I like that the Strength boulders stay put when you move them! So I don't have to keep going back to the PC to get my Strength slave, which is so annoying. I also like how big the boulders are, very hard to miss xD

I started with LeafGreen, then Sapphire, then Emerald. Then I stopped for like two years. But I found out about Pearl and got that. So it's kind of like two starts...:)

Chapter 9 Lucanor charged forward, his feet going too fast to even touch the sand. He held his shed skin up under his armpits and leaned forward, his forehead leading the way. Marmas ran behind him, shell in hand, water gun at the ready. After him was Furoink, who pounced across the...

Finally, Chapter 8 is here! It's not long and there's no real reason it took so long to write, but it's here now and that's all that matters. xD Anyway, since it's been so long, I'll summarize what's happened so far: That summary does no justice to the story, so if you haven't read it...

Chapter 7 Lucanor and Laiga woke to the sound of Whirm screaming. She was flying through the air, swirling in erratic circles that stopped and started unpredictably. Apparently, the spot between the bench and the trash can wasn’t snug enough. Lucanor rubbed his eyes, trying to get past the...

Chapter 6: The tree line started abruptly, as if the forest knew better than to grow beyond its bounds. Or, as if someone had chopped down the unnecessary trees. Lucanor pondered each possibility for a few seconds while Laiga caught up to him. “It’s beautiful,” he said as she...

Chapter 5: Lucanor and Laiga were so focused on the city, so awestruck at it’s glory that they completely disregarded the gatehouse, knocking their heads against it’s stony wall. They looked up at the small building, wondering how they hadn’t noticed it before. Then it dawned on them...

I'm getting both-- White because I always get the second one (Diamond and Pearl, FireRed and LeafGreen, etc.) and Black because I like it's version exclusives better, except Reshiram. It'll also make completing the dex easier xD

Chapter 4: By the desert’s standards, it was a nice, calm day. Slow wind blowing some sand around, sunlight penetrating through to the ground, heating the sand. Just a normal day in the desert. To Laiga, however, it was hell. The sand whipped around viscously consuming anyone who...

Chapter 3: Lucanor stepped onto Hodomoe Bridge and stopped in his tracks. On both sides of him lied a vast expanse of the water he had heard of. He ran to the side of the bridge, grabbing the metal supports that held it up and thrust his head as far out as he could. Straight down he saw the...

Thank you :D Chapter 2: Lucanor was used to the desert, with it’s unpredictable schedule of sandstorms and sinkholes, but this was ridiculous. He stood in the middle of the worst sandstorm he had ever seen, and he knew it was the worst because he couldn’t see. It could’ve been midnight or...

I could use a beta reader for Zuruggu and the Icy Beast. I've only done chapter 1 so far, so there's plenty of room to improve xD.

Any comments, criticisms and suggestions are welcomed and encouraged. Thanks in advance. Chapter 1 The desert. A vast wasteland filled to the brim with sand and sunshine. The climate denies the collection of water anywhere. Even if a drop of water could make its journey from the sky to...