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Re: The Song (Possible PG-13) ...thanks, Jess. It's good to know one of my friends from off the internet cares. Anyways, I make good on my promises, right? This chapter's out before I leave and I hope this won't be my last chapter until next summer... Also couldn't get the darn thing to...

Re: The Song (Possible PG-13) Sorry for anyone reading this fic and who's been wondering where I am. It's been a long time since I've updated this. Schoolwork's had me swamped, even throughout Summer Break and I'm leaving for a trip on Friday. However, I can honestly say that after huge amounts...

Is it too late for me to sign up? Character name: Marina Julianos Character position: Ranger Partner Pokemon: Female Oshawott nicknamed Mizu Description: Marina has medium length, wavy, blonde hair that is usually pulled back, green eyes, and is fairly pale. Her casual wear is a pair of...

Re: The Song (Possible PG-13) Thank~you! Yeah. I picked Psychic because the move inflicts more pain than confusion, and as shown by chapter two, Sunny will fight back, and Dr. Usagi knew that. She just needed to be pushed a little more. The names... ah! No, sorry. Sailor Moon, right...

This is one of my favorite ships! (BTW: I hear that the only time they're seen together in the games is as Multi-Battle partners on the Battle Train.)

Re: POKEMON: The Power Inside (Chapter 18 - Sacred Fire) All right! After coming back on the forums, I decided to catch up with this, and I must say, the newer chapters are just as incredible, if not more so, than the earlier chapters. This is a really really good story. I'm enjoying reading...

Hm. This is an interesting story. There are a few typos here and there, but none that I can pick out at this current moment. All in all, it is well written and I'll definitely be keeping an eye on this.

Re: The Song (Possible PG-13) Yay! Chapter 4! Please give a little time to read and a little more to comment, Thanks go to anyone who has already commented. A map of Tenkou for all who care. Chapter 4- Trouble at the Labs Sunny blinked at Dr. Usagi. ‘Damien Redwood.’ The name rang through...

Legacy, thank-you. This is a great idea and I really needed this. Honestly, I can already see flaws in my writing that I need to work on. I usually tend to use all of the senses except smell, (How do you describe some using words other than 'weird'?) so this might help me work on that. And Big...

Re: The Song (Possible PG-13) Thank-you! It's always nice to get comments.

Re: The Song (Possible PG-13) Well, yes, but I haven't introduced any of them yet.

Re: The Song (Possible PG-13) Thank-you! Sunny is an awkward name, but I happen to be very bad at naming characters. The name Sunny is also based on a character for a story that I wrote two years ago, who had the same design, but a completely different personality. Sorry about the...

I love getting comments, too. (Please check out my story. Link in Sig.) I had writers block for a while, too, so I know how that feels. Which one do you like better? For me, I like both equally, but ROXAS trumps all.

I really like this idea. I do have to say, though, these chapters are very short and hold little description. Some of my favorite scenes from the play are skipped over and only mentioned briefly. I know that it is challenging to adapt a play to a story, but please, add more detail! There is so...

Again, Giratina I you have made my day. Your story is just incredible and I can't wait for more. (P.S. You have Ven and Van in your sig. Kyaaa!)

Re: The Song (Possible PG-13) That's okay. I just didn't want you getting confused. That scene will be expanded on in later chapters. Everything except the Pokemon seen will be of my own creation. Even the region is my own, so I hope I can give everyone a vivid picture of the landscape...

This is a very good story. It blends well for a crossover of three different thing. The description is incredible and the characters are well-characterized. My only complaint is that it was very long. Making a chapter long isn't bad, but don't make it too long. Readers may get bored or lost...

Re: The Song (Possible PG-13) Wow. Thanks for the review. It's nice to know that people are starting to read this story more. Here you stated that Hikaru was dead, however I stated that he was in a coma. I just don't want you to get confused. And, what is a vhati? I'm sorry, I just...

Re: The Song (Possible PG-13) All right! Chapter 3! I'm going to try and update every Saturday now. Oh and also, I'M BACK!!!!:ksmile: I'm going to give some characters character themes. Sunny's theme is... Emotion/ Unwavering Emotions from Pokemon Black and White I also have artwork of Sunny...

Blue by Utada Hikaru.