Ok thank you. I have learned a lot from this grammar book my brother has for school. It is really helpful for writing fics. And I am trying to get better at grammar.
Know something cool? I am getting better grades in literature and writing in school since I start this fic.
Special thanks to my cousin for helping me with grammar and editing.
C 13
"What are you talking about, Gary?" Ash asked.
Gary's glistening green eyes never left Ash.
"I'm sorry. I wish there was another way, but there is not. Something's happening, Ash. And it's bigger than you or me."...
Re: Pokemon V - Destiny Discovery (VDD) - Episode 3 Up!
Sorry, but this just isn't very good. It could be good if you added more content besides just what the characters say to each other. It's nothing but quotations. You don't show the readers what is going on at all you just tell us like a...
Ok sorry this took so long I was tryig to get the grammar really good with the book my brother let me use. He looked it over for me too so I hope the grammar is better.
Chapter 12
Ash awoke with a throbbing headache so intense he groaned and felt the piercing lump on his scalp. Other...
Re: Pokemon V - Destiny Discovery (VDD) - Episode 2 Up!
A suggestion: space out the paragraphs please so this isn't just a big jumble of text. Also I think it is going to fast and needs more development and describing.
Re: Pokemon V - Destiny Discovery (VDD) [Preview]
I will ignore your asshole comment on my thread and give you a real review even tho u don't deserve it.
Your preview is okay but needs far more. It is just commands back and forth without anything else no description about what else is going...
Since I did not get picked to be a judge I will try to help here.
Best Newcomer - Dai - really good writer and hard worker
Best Reviewer - Legacy - Always helpful but positive and is not mean
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