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    COMPLETE: Striking Back: Memoirs of a Clone (MATURE)

    Amazing. That is all I can say.
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    Obsolete: Fic/Author of the Month

    Re: Fic of the Month - February-Striking Back: Memoirs of a Clone by Dai Who is March fic of the month? *hint hint* hehe
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    Ash Ketchum's Story

    Ahh I was grounded for a few weeks from the computer but I am back and ready to write more!
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    Ash Ketchum's Story

    Ok thank you everybody.
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    Ash Ketchum's Story

    Ok thank you. I have learned a lot from this grammar book my brother has for school. It is really helpful for writing fics. And I am trying to get better at grammar. Know something cool? I am getting better grades in literature and writing in school since I start this fic.
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    Ash Ketchum's Story

    Special thanks to my cousin for helping me with grammar and editing. C 13 "What are you talking about, Gary?" Ash asked. Gary's glistening green eyes never left Ash. "I'm sorry. I wish there was another way, but there is not. Something's happening, Ash. And it's bigger than you or me."...
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    Your Writer's Workshop 2012 Winter Award Winners! [Overall Winners Announced!]

    Congrats to the winners! Well deserved Legacy and Whisper! I hope I can win a badge next time!
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    TEEN: Pokemon V - Destiny Discovery (VDD) - Episode 4 Up!

    Re: Pokemon V - Destiny Discovery (VDD) - Episode 3 Up! Sorry, but this just isn't very good. It could be good if you added more content besides just what the characters say to each other. It's nothing but quotations. You don't show the readers what is going on at all you just tell us like a...
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    Saddest episodes?

    I agree the Chinchar episode was saddest.
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    COMPLETE: RaccoonGoon's First (and only) Crack Fic. (MATURE)

    I don't think they have Olive Garden in Pallet Town.
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    Your Writer's Workshop 2012 Winter Award Winners! [Overall Winners Announced!]

    Re: Your Writer's Workshop 2012 Winter Award Winners! Good job everybody. I hope to one day win an award but I will work hard to get better!
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    Ash Ketchum's Story

    No need to be a asshole about it. If you do not like do not read or post idiot.
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    Ash Ketchum's Story

    Ok sorry this took so long I was tryig to get the grammar really good with the book my brother let me use. He looked it over for me too so I hope the grammar is better. Chapter 12 Ash awoke with a throbbing headache so intense he groaned and felt the piercing lump on his scalp. Other...
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    Ash Ketchum's Story

    Ok thank you for the review! I will keep trying!
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    Writers' Workshop General Chat Thread

    I think having music with the fic is a great idea!
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    TEEN: Pokemon V - Destiny Discovery (VDD) - Episode 4 Up!

    Re: Pokemon V - Destiny Discovery (VDD) - Episode 2 Up! A suggestion: space out the paragraphs please so this isn't just a big jumble of text. Also I think it is going to fast and needs more development and describing.
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    Ash Ketchum's Story

    Ok sorry. I will try.
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    TEEN: Pokemon V - Destiny Discovery (VDD) - Episode 4 Up!

    Re: Pokemon V - Destiny Discovery (VDD) [Preview] I will ignore your asshole comment on my thread and give you a real review even tho u don't deserve it. Your preview is okay but needs far more. It is just commands back and forth without anything else no description about what else is going...
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    Writer's Workshop Winter 2012 Voting Thread [Nominees and judges announced!]

    Since I did not get picked to be a judge I will try to help here. Best Newcomer - Dai - really good writer and hard worker Best Reviewer - Legacy - Always helpful but positive and is not mean
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    Pocket Monsters: The Battle Quest (7)

    Re: Pocket Monsters: The Battle Quest (6) Ok sorry. I am just excited that's all.
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