Read it. You still need to work on the description, so for now I'll leave here a "pro" tip: if you search for the moves in Bulbapedia there's the section "In the anime" that contains a description of how the move looks like and you can base on it to describe your battles better Example: "Nidoking's horn glows orange. Then, an orange beam is shot out of it at the opponent, or Nidoking fires an orange beam from its mouth." That's for Hyper Beam
EDIT: Read. I think you should follow the others' advice of expanding your description. Also try to write using Microsoft Word if you have a hard time getting all the uppercase at the beginning of phrases etc and to help you space correctly.
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