First off, I think you're a really good writer. c: The story flows smoothly, and I love that you've made a 'trainer story' more than that, with the addition of a plot, baddies, and OCs. <3 The only thing's I saw have already been mentioned by other people, so all in all, I'm looking forward to more! C:
Yeah, I'll try to skim down on the cursing, but I do mention it in the description just in case. c;
I'll get rid of the brackets, I actually was kind of wary about putting them in there myself. lD Guess I wshould have followed my instincts.
Ooh, VM me a link and I'll be sure to check yours out!
Anyway, thank you very much for the review! <3 It's very appreciated~!
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