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This chapter was difficult to edit and even write for many reasons. Kallisto is being wracked by guilt and he has taken an important first step forward. But I wanted to make sure there's explicit doubt in there about his intentions. Is he genuinely sorry for what he's done, or is he doing it for his own conscience?Kallisto's trying, but he's still got a long way to go. Tono's right in that Kallisto is more concerned about his own image than actually making an effort to amend fences with Nori.
He probably just didn't think it'd go this far, in a sort of "what have I done" sort of way. But as Tono pointed out, he probably did in fact think it would get horrid for Nori.And seriously, I find it hard to believe that he never thought people would take his misguided call-out so seriously that they'd send Nori death threats.
He's just an allusion to Pokemon Hunter J. She's unimportant hereI'm definitely curious as to who that guy in the purple cloak is. I can only assume he'll appear in later chapters.
This information is actually already in there: in M3-4, Kallisto says he uses last name as a form of respect, except when requested as with Tono or Volkner. When does he stop calling Nori by his last name? Oh, one chapter later.I had forgotten that Kallisto called everyone by their last names, and went back to an earlier chapter to double-check. Also curious to know why he started calling Nori by his first name.
"Carino, look," he said, far more sternly. "You might not like this, but you have to deal with it. I'm willing to help, no matter what happened between us in the past. Do you want to be a Pokemon Rehabilitator or not?"
His answer was a simple, "Screw you!" He shoved his oppressor aside with his cast and marched for the door. He paused when Kallisto addressed him with anger.
"Carino, if you walk away now, I'll lose all respect for you."
Nori turned. "You?" the boy laughed. He couldn't help it. This was too funny. "Respect me?" He laughed some more before seamlessly going into a scream. "I don't want or need your respect!"
His answer was a simple, "Screw you!" He shoved his oppressor aside with his cast and marched for the door. He paused when Kallisto addressed him with anger.
"Carino, if you walk away now, I'll lose all respect for you."
Nori turned. "You?" the boy laughed. He couldn't help it. This was too funny. "Respect me?" He laughed some more before seamlessly going into a scream. "I don't want or need your respect!"
So yeah. There's actually one or two times where he does say Carino after, but the fact that he's still calling him Nori is open for interpretation. And of course, now Tono is the other viewpoint character. Aside, don't think anything of him internally calling anyone their first name when he's the viewpoint character - there's nothing to that.