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I wanted to review this Wednesday, but I got almost no sleep the prior night and was not in peak reviewing condition. On Thursday I was catching up with what I couldn't do on Tuesday. Better late than never, though.
*Something about a Nurse Joy freaking out over their daughter's elopement and getting arrested is deeply disturbing, yet also oddly comedic.
*Definitely still getting Old Man Marley vibes from the sailor.
*Lol, Nori hoping to reveal the truth about Kallisto out to Arumi.
*Aaaand denied, but even if she won't believe him she may prove a useful source of intelligence for Nori (or exposition for the reader ).
*Hmmm, so something happened between Ollie and Kallisto that led to Ollie changing...
*So this Calix fellow is Lux's brother that left, I'm guessing.
*Haha, oh dear. Cynthia is Kallisto's cousin. I recall you mentioning Nori's disliking her was going to have a payoff...
*And when it's someone 90% of the world loves Arumi is suddenly a bit less gung-ho about publishing a big scoop. To be fair at her age that could be social suicide.
*Training to be an official seems pretty extreme so far. If this were not the Pokémon world I'd suggest twelve years old is a bit young for it. I guess Sparta existed, though.
Not a ton to say again. It's a good chapter and we learned some interesting things I'm sure will come into play later, but in a lot of ways it feels like a slow build up to April 20.
*Something about a Nurse Joy freaking out over their daughter's elopement and getting arrested is deeply disturbing, yet also oddly comedic.
*Definitely still getting Old Man Marley vibes from the sailor.
*Lol, Nori hoping to reveal the truth about Kallisto out to Arumi.
*Aaaand denied, but even if she won't believe him she may prove a useful source of intelligence for Nori (or exposition for the reader ).
*Hmmm, so something happened between Ollie and Kallisto that led to Ollie changing...
*So this Calix fellow is Lux's brother that left, I'm guessing.
*Haha, oh dear. Cynthia is Kallisto's cousin. I recall you mentioning Nori's disliking her was going to have a payoff...
*And when it's someone 90% of the world loves Arumi is suddenly a bit less gung-ho about publishing a big scoop. To be fair at her age that could be social suicide.
*Training to be an official seems pretty extreme so far. If this were not the Pokémon world I'd suggest twelve years old is a bit young for it. I guess Sparta existed, though.
Not a ton to say again. It's a good chapter and we learned some interesting things I'm sure will come into play later, but in a lot of ways it feels like a slow build up to April 20.