Pokemon Green Adventures[Lastest Episode:002]

[The Golden Tyranitar]

My sprite comic.I'm new to this business,so any constructive/instructive criticism you may have,please tell me.
Anyway here is chapter 001

Spoiler

And 002:

Spoiler

 

[Pidgeot]

Re: Pokemon Green Adventures

Hmmmm... pretty good.

I like how you've contained quite a lot of humour in it. The only I thing you need to improve is the dodgy title screen, because all the sides are going this way and that, if you know what I mean.

Other than that, it's great. Glad to see more sprite comics here.

 

[The Golden Tyranitar]

Re: Pokemon Green Adventures

Thanks for the advice!THe title sceen was one of the bigger slip ups...but I'll sort it for 002

 

[Pidgeot]

Re: Pokemon Green Adventures

Yep, that'll be good.

 

[raychuu]

Re: Pokemon Green Adventures

Hmm, I can't see it...

 

[The Golden Tyranitar]

Re: Pokemon Green Adventures

I'll post a link off site...ummmm..hang on...Here we go

 

[raychuu]

Re: Pokemon Green Adventures

The comic is fun

Although you should probably make it bigger, I had some problems reading.

 

[The Golden Tyranitar]

Re: Pokemon Green Adventures

Its only small because I had to link off site,the real thing is bigger.
try this link

 

[Shiny]

Re: Pokemon Green Adventures

Nice! I'm kind of enjoying this comic spree. DHL inspire you?

 

[The Golden Tyranitar]

Re: Pokemon Green Adventures

He sure did ;D
Chapter two up soon.

 

[Pidgeot]

Re: Pokemon Green Adventures

Hahaha, great to know that I inspired you.

 

[0_o o_0]

Re: Pokemon Green Adventures

hey the comic is great
"Find a rival, beat his ass" lol

 

[The Golden Tyranitar]

Re: Pokemon Green Adventures

And...002 is here!

 

[raychuu]

Haha, very funny.
If I'm not wrong, everyone picked the Pokémon that fits their names, right?

 

[Blazaking]

I like it! Just that Leaf's text is hard to read. Make it darker.

Otherwise, I love it!

 

[The Golden Tyranitar]

@Raichu:Haha..We'll see ;D
@Blazaking:Thanks for the tip

 

[raychuu]

Just that Leaf's text is hard to read. Make it darker.

On that note, it would also be better if you made the names bold to difer a bit from the text,

 

[The Golden Tyranitar]

Good Thinking

 

[Pidgeot]

It's okay 'part from the spelling errors.

 

[The Golden Tyranitar]

I have noted the Errors,And fond out why my spell check wasn't working.