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  • Dum de dum...

    I'm still waiting for that review... I think I'll read your fic in the meantime, since i never got around to chapter 5.
    Also, I still await your review!

    Don't be too hard on me for the battle's depth, though. I figured that since Gary was going to lose, I should save all the big description for the rematch.
    I know. You need to rely on readers' ability to visualize rather than putting it right in their faces.
    Or my older sister.

    Whichever works.

    There'll probably be only a couple of "hints" this volume, like maybe one or two for Leaf and Gary both. And hints don't work as well in writing as in animation. I've learned that the hard way.
    Beer's weird like that. Still, I have no clue how I'm going to handle Leaf's side of the relationship, since I haven't the slightest idea how female crushes work.
    Ah. You did kinda cut off on that one comment though. I'm itching to hear the rest of that sentence. LOL.
    I'll review your fanfic soon I just want to reread the previous chapters first cause I've kind forgot about some things
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