unShinyUmbreon
The 'unShiny' Umbreon!
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Hello again. My name is unShinyUmbreon! A lot of you may know me from my other fan-fiction stories:
http://bmgf.bulbagarden.net/f227/ch...-parts-1-3-ending-updated-1-20-2013-a-145407/
http://bmgf.bulbagarden.net/f227/birth-hero-chapter-one-two-three-1-27-2013-currently-hiatus-146008/
Even though "The Birth of a Hero" is currently still in the making, I have decided to start a new project all together, and put that on a short hiatus, but will announce it's return when I am ready. Black Hearts is the name of a new fan-fiction story I want to work on, so I hope you'll enjoy it. Not only is it meant for the entertainment of other's, it's also for me to practice my descriptive writing. Thank you!
No copyright intended! This was produced merely out of creativity, all credit goes to it's respective owners, for I own NOTHING!
Black Hearts:
As I lie on the top of the hill, I can feel the warmth as it surrounded with a viel of comfort.The sun rose up from under the horrizon as it's light's flashed what had seemed like an elegant painting in the sky. Orange, Yellow and Pink roared over me. I felt no care in the world at all. Just my friends and I, traveling the vast green land, no longer having to worry about ever going home. I was free.
Until one day, the very horrizen had betrayed me, and those colour's I had enjoyed for the longest time had been stolen from me. The feeling was as if someone pierced my heart and then ripped it out of my chest. What was happening? I asked myself. The sky had turned completely black. It was still, and heavy. I couldn't see a thing.
I could hear my Pokeball's, as they trembled from inside my bag. I closed my eye's, and imagined my friends: Umbreon, Espeon, Pidgeot, Blazekin.
Do I dare open my eyes? Or do I keep them shut, so I could further feel safe by the strengh and bravery of my friends.
No. I couldn't. This wasn't something I could just close my eye's on, and then it would disappear.
So I opened them, and looked up, even tough I couldn't see a thing. My eye's we'rent starting to adjust, what could I possibly do? Am I dead? Or will I wake up from this nightmare?
There, If I saw anything in that tragic, dark moment which seemed like the bottom of a dark abyss, I saw what had been causing this mess.
It wasn't a friend, it was something entirely different. It's one blue eye lit up the entire sky with in that second, and then vanished, releasing my heart and the colour's up above, thing's were back to normal, but I didn't know for how long.
I decided to run back down the hill to Alvenu Town, which was a small area I had last been. I ran, and I didn't stop until I had reached a Pokemon Center, there I had asked one of the nurses,
"Did any of you see what just happened? Th--The sky..." I started to tremble, just like my Pokeball's.
The nurse then looked at me as if I had four arms and two heads. She said that no such thing that I had described to her, soon after I ahold of myself again, had happened.
Alvenu Town was famous for it's library, so that's exactly where I went off to next. What I saw had to be a Pokemon of some kind, so it was my next intention to find out which Pokemon it was, and how I could deal with it if it were to ever return.
I knew it had wanted something from me if the people down at the Pokemon Center had claimed to see no change in the sky, I even got the same looks from the people down at the library. I went in to the back, and I thought to myself I would probably have better luck looking for something mysterious and dark. The book I had chosen from the shelf was entitled: "Pitch Black", which I had translated since it was spelled through the Pokemon, 'Unknown'.
I flipped through the padges, and the entire book had been written in the same writing that was on the cover. I grew more and more confused, stressed out and eagar. Until I flipped to the very last page in the back of the book, it was a picture, and under it, " ダークライ". Darkrai.
Thank you for reading the story sofar! I'll edit the title when I have added some more to this story. But, sofar, tell me what you think?
http://bmgf.bulbagarden.net/f227/ch...-parts-1-3-ending-updated-1-20-2013-a-145407/
http://bmgf.bulbagarden.net/f227/birth-hero-chapter-one-two-three-1-27-2013-currently-hiatus-146008/
Even though "The Birth of a Hero" is currently still in the making, I have decided to start a new project all together, and put that on a short hiatus, but will announce it's return when I am ready. Black Hearts is the name of a new fan-fiction story I want to work on, so I hope you'll enjoy it. Not only is it meant for the entertainment of other's, it's also for me to practice my descriptive writing. Thank you!
No copyright intended! This was produced merely out of creativity, all credit goes to it's respective owners, for I own NOTHING!
Black Hearts:
As I lie on the top of the hill, I can feel the warmth as it surrounded with a viel of comfort.The sun rose up from under the horrizon as it's light's flashed what had seemed like an elegant painting in the sky. Orange, Yellow and Pink roared over me. I felt no care in the world at all. Just my friends and I, traveling the vast green land, no longer having to worry about ever going home. I was free.
Until one day, the very horrizen had betrayed me, and those colour's I had enjoyed for the longest time had been stolen from me. The feeling was as if someone pierced my heart and then ripped it out of my chest. What was happening? I asked myself. The sky had turned completely black. It was still, and heavy. I couldn't see a thing.
I could hear my Pokeball's, as they trembled from inside my bag. I closed my eye's, and imagined my friends: Umbreon, Espeon, Pidgeot, Blazekin.
Do I dare open my eyes? Or do I keep them shut, so I could further feel safe by the strengh and bravery of my friends.
No. I couldn't. This wasn't something I could just close my eye's on, and then it would disappear.
So I opened them, and looked up, even tough I couldn't see a thing. My eye's we'rent starting to adjust, what could I possibly do? Am I dead? Or will I wake up from this nightmare?
There, If I saw anything in that tragic, dark moment which seemed like the bottom of a dark abyss, I saw what had been causing this mess.
It wasn't a friend, it was something entirely different. It's one blue eye lit up the entire sky with in that second, and then vanished, releasing my heart and the colour's up above, thing's were back to normal, but I didn't know for how long.
I decided to run back down the hill to Alvenu Town, which was a small area I had last been. I ran, and I didn't stop until I had reached a Pokemon Center, there I had asked one of the nurses,
"Did any of you see what just happened? Th--The sky..." I started to tremble, just like my Pokeball's.
The nurse then looked at me as if I had four arms and two heads. She said that no such thing that I had described to her, soon after I ahold of myself again, had happened.
Alvenu Town was famous for it's library, so that's exactly where I went off to next. What I saw had to be a Pokemon of some kind, so it was my next intention to find out which Pokemon it was, and how I could deal with it if it were to ever return.
I knew it had wanted something from me if the people down at the Pokemon Center had claimed to see no change in the sky, I even got the same looks from the people down at the library. I went in to the back, and I thought to myself I would probably have better luck looking for something mysterious and dark. The book I had chosen from the shelf was entitled: "Pitch Black", which I had translated since it was spelled through the Pokemon, 'Unknown'.
I flipped through the padges, and the entire book had been written in the same writing that was on the cover. I grew more and more confused, stressed out and eagar. Until I flipped to the very last page in the back of the book, it was a picture, and under it, " ダークライ". Darkrai.
Thank you for reading the story sofar! I'll edit the title when I have added some more to this story. But, sofar, tell me what you think?
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