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Question here -- is it not the best timed/location in relation to the story/plot itself? Or in relation to what's happening to Andrea (surviving a potential kidnapping, growing social problems, being homeless) and where she physically is?
Not the best timed after a very friendly conversation in which there's no indication Andrea seems stressed at all. That and the melodrama of the hotel description indeed. Her meltdown is warranted, like I said, and believable by itself.