Finally!! Phew! I've managed to catch up with the entire story - thank god for the summer holidays.
Having read Dragons Roar earlier in the year I have to say you've grown a lot since then Your writing and grammar is much better and many times I've stopped and said to myself: "This is great! This is like a published novel!"
I really enjoyed your last few chapters. The battles were well executed and the differences in styles and battle conditions made the competition seem different and unique, instead of a stream of 6-on-6 or 2-on-2 Pokémon battles (especially liked Claudia versus Zephyr)
In my opinion, your greatest talent is creating strong, believable characters with powerful personalities that really shone through in the last chapter.
Having read Dragons Roar earlier in the year I have to say you've grown a lot since then Your writing and grammar is much better and many times I've stopped and said to myself: "This is great! This is like a published novel!"
I really enjoyed your last few chapters. The battles were well executed and the differences in styles and battle conditions made the competition seem different and unique, instead of a stream of 6-on-6 or 2-on-2 Pokémon battles (especially liked Claudia versus Zephyr)
In my opinion, your greatest talent is creating strong, believable characters with powerful personalities that really shone through in the last chapter.