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Honestly I agree with you that I could've described the scene in the stadium better. In fact I'm a little disappointed in myself because of that because I don't know what happened, I mean as soon as I reached that part it was as if my mind was shutting down on itself and it ended up coming out rushed. The selection was all planned in my head but when it finally came down to writing it I couldn't find a way to describe it better so I apologize for that, I'll be editing that scene tonight though....I know it's weird cause I could've done this before posting it xD but it wasn't till I posted it that I realized that I should make it better.
On that note I'd like to announce that I'm going to be making a short spin off fic called Dragon of Water, the fic will focused on Fin's past as well as exploring the events of the "Day of the Black Cloud" mentioned back in chapter 25.
On that note I'd like to announce that I'm going to be making a short spin off fic called Dragon of Water, the fic will focused on Fin's past as well as exploring the events of the "Day of the Black Cloud" mentioned back in chapter 25.