pokemopolis warrior on his salamence

[empoleon dynamite]

Shot at 2007-07-25

this is a warrior and his salamence in 3000BC at the time of pokemopolis
im considering doing some fanfic on this guy but im not the best author.
please tell me the good and bad on this but remember im only 14.

 

[Blackjack Gabbiani]

The Salamence looks good, the rider looks all right, but he looks like he's about to fall right off.

 

[empoleon dynamite]

i defonitly agree with you on that. i put him in an awkward possition since his arms are in front of his wings, but you cant even see weather his body is even in contact with salamence. if i ever draw him again he will be sat in front of the wings