Sinderella
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Hey there, I'm Sinderella! Deciding to start chronicling my longfic here too! I've been planning this fic for a while, and hope to be able to keep up with semi-regular updates!
This fic has kind of become my baby in the past couple months. It's extremely OC centric, but expect to see some canon characters join the main cast in the second arc. There's also some fakemon, a new type, and a new villainous team in the mix. I hope you enjoy your read! It's still a WIP so pls pls pls pls don't bash me too hard......
Synopsis: Kalos is currently in the clutches of a drug epidemic, and Odette Cinq-Mars is a former theater hopeful with a little too much time on her hands and a penchant for reading into things a little deeper than most.
When her best friend Noel uncovers an alarming discrepancy in some public case files regarding the drug epidemic, she begins to do more than just question. When an old flame returns to haunt her, she launches herself into the world of the Shiny Pokemon Trade to uncover some answers. She soon finds she might have been in some deep trouble long before she involved herself…
Warnings: I will be tagging each chapter with trigger warnings, but overall, this fic is rated K+-M for frequent adult language, implications of sexual assault and abuse, drug usage, light gore, occult happenings, and overall angst.
Index
Prologue Awoken
Chapter 1 A Lot On Her Mind
Chapter 2 The Audacity...
Chapter 3 A Bad, Bad Run-In
Chapter 4 She's Unabashedly Nosy
Chapter 5 How Could This Possibly Be a Good Idea?
Chapter 6 Psychopath
Chapter 7 Something's Rotten in Kalos
Chapter 8 Reading is Essential
Chapter 9 Are You Actually In Control?
Chapter 10 She's Unabashedly Nosy...and Sick
This fic has kind of become my baby in the past couple months. It's extremely OC centric, but expect to see some canon characters join the main cast in the second arc. There's also some fakemon, a new type, and a new villainous team in the mix. I hope you enjoy your read! It's still a WIP so pls pls pls pls don't bash me too hard......
Synopsis: Kalos is currently in the clutches of a drug epidemic, and Odette Cinq-Mars is a former theater hopeful with a little too much time on her hands and a penchant for reading into things a little deeper than most.
When her best friend Noel uncovers an alarming discrepancy in some public case files regarding the drug epidemic, she begins to do more than just question. When an old flame returns to haunt her, she launches herself into the world of the Shiny Pokemon Trade to uncover some answers. She soon finds she might have been in some deep trouble long before she involved herself…
Warnings: I will be tagging each chapter with trigger warnings, but overall, this fic is rated K+-M for frequent adult language, implications of sexual assault and abuse, drug usage, light gore, occult happenings, and overall angst.
Patch Notes!
12/30/21:
12/30/21:
- Chapter 6
- Made Odette way more lovey toward Dorien, despite the fact that she's disgusted.
- Added small kissing scene.
- Chapter 7
- Made Odette way more lovey toward Dorien, despite the fact that she hates it.
- Made Dorien more handsy toward Odette.
- Added larger, somewhat noncon kiss.
- Added emphasis on unhappy shiny pokemon.
- Added scene where waiter drops drinks all over a rich person, and the rich person yells at him. Odette wants to help, but cannot because she's playing a part.
- Chapter 8
- Eliminated every exposition about Odette thinking she's being a stalker.
- Chapter 9
- Chapter name change.
- Entire latter half of chapter was overhauled to eliminate a battle scene, and add a seen where the concept of Odette being possessed is introduced.
- Blatant show of Pokemon trafficking.
- Odette is still sent to the hospital, but for a different reason.
- Added the concept of a "Pokemon Coercion Service" that shiny traders use to coerce Pokemon that have special evolution conditions to evolve.
- Conversation with Clovis slightly edited.
- Conversation with Enora heavily edited to show more compromise.
- Prologue
- Light edits to typos and incorrect grammar.
- Chapter 1
- Changed Noel's "in" at the Kalos PD from a friend he knew in an online class to somebody he knew in person.
- Chapter 3
- Chopped down the opening scene.
- Chapter 1
- Moved explanation of shiny trade from chapter 3 to chapter 1.
- Chapter 3
- Rewrote battle scene almost entirely. Provided more stakes, more Odette getting mad, and more Dorien seeming like a competent trainer.
- Chapter 4
- Modified the discussion with Bernard to track with the changed battle scene.
- Chapter 8
- Added some extra dialogue to indicate that the Rotom in Odette's RotomPhone is a Rotom going through rehabilitation.
- Chapter 1
- Mentioned Odette's blood pressure problems and overall poor immunity issues sooner.
- Adjusted verbiage to refer to Pokemon as "partners" and "friends" and not like pets.
- Gave the Purrloins director a name--Martin.
- Wrote in the concept of Odette's Pokemon taking leave from working to pack for the move.
- Move date has been moved down to April.
- Tweaked Acadia bringing up the league--Alola forming the league a few years out, and not within the next few months.
- Lowercased all Pokemon species names unless they were being referred to as proper nouns.
- Chapter 2
- Lowercased all Pokemon species names unless they were being referred to as proper nouns.
- Tweaked Odette talking about Loic--she now speaks more fondly of him. Mentions how he got her out of bed during a depressive spiral, and that he decided to stay with her instead of returning to the wild.
- Chapter 3
- Lowercased all Pokemon species names unless they were being referred to as proper nouns.
- Adjusted verbiage to refer to Pokemon as "partners" and "friends" and not like pets.
- Introduced RotomPhone as a helper Pokemon in rehab from an injury.
- Rewrote Dorien and Odette's meeting, where Odette clearly still has a crush on Dorien, and thinks about the almost-relationship they had in high school.
- Mentioned that Odette had her entire team sans Loic in high school.
- Odette's realization about Dorien's involvement in the shiny trade hits a lot harder, and it's more obvious that she's perplexed about forgetting it. Emphasis on how she didn't realize it until later into their relationship.
- Dorien is more forthright about starting a relationship with her.
- Mention that Odette's team take different classes from her during the day.
- Move names are capitalized.
- Chapter 4
- Lowercased all Pokemon species names unless they were being referred to as proper nouns.
- Adjusted verbiage to refer to Pokemon as "partners" and "friends" and not like pets.
- More exposition on Odette's anger problems. Rewrote the excerpt about her breaking a student's finger. More emphasis on the fact her anger issues have been diagnosed as part of a hormone problems, also associated with her other medical issues.
- Bernard knows about Odette's former thing for Dorien.
- Chapter 5
- Lowercased all Pokemon species names unless they were being referred to as proper nouns.
- Adjusted verbiage to refer to Pokemon as "partners" and "friends" and not like pets.
- Adjusted some dialogue around Dorien.
- Chapter 6
- Lowercased all Pokemon species names unless they were being referred to as proper nouns.
- Adjusted verbiage to refer to Pokemon as "partners" and "friends" and not like pets.
- Included Vienna's partner, a Gardevoir named Thea.
- Chapter 7
- Lowercased all Pokemon species names unless they were being referred to as proper nouns.
- Adjusted verbiage to refer to Pokemon as "partners" and "friends" and not like pets.
- Mentioned Dorien's clique, consisting of Denis, Colin, Adam, and Lionel.
- Touched on Noel's former relationship with Colin, and his general awkwardness with commitment.
- Chapter 8
- Lowercased all Pokemon species names unless they were being referred to as proper nouns.
- Adjusted verbiage to refer to Pokemon as "partners" and "friends" and not like pets.
- Slight line edits.
- Chapter 9
- Lowercased all Pokemon species names unless they were being referred to as proper nouns.
- Adjusted verbiage to refer to Pokemon as "partners" and "friends" and not like pets.
- Included the names of Dorien's friends in passing.
- A little more dialogue on Noel's commitment issues.
- Chapter 10
- Lowercased all Pokemon species names unless they were being referred to as proper nouns.
- Adjusted verbiage to refer to Pokemon as "partners" and "friends" and not like pets.
- Added a little more description to Marieanne and tweaked some of her dialogue.
Index
Prologue Awoken
Chapter 1 A Lot On Her Mind
Chapter 2 The Audacity...
Chapter 3 A Bad, Bad Run-In
Chapter 4 She's Unabashedly Nosy
Chapter 5 How Could This Possibly Be a Good Idea?
Chapter 6 Psychopath
Chapter 7 Something's Rotten in Kalos
Chapter 8 Reading is Essential
Chapter 9 Are You Actually In Control?
Chapter 10 She's Unabashedly Nosy...and Sick
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