You really do compare yourself to them TOO much. Your not your cousin, nor did you have the same people, don't beat yourself up over something silly like that.
Yeah I'm definitely gonna need to re-read from the beginning once everything's out in the open.
Ah I agree! I think because Index was split into individual arcs rather than something central, so Railgun had more character focus. Are you gonna work your way through Index season 2 or Railgun S?
Yeah. I was working on it all day. here it is. I based him on something you're probably familiar with. tell me if there's something you want me to change. I tried Posting it here but it's over the limit of characters I can type in a VM. so Ima look for the Sign Ups and post it there.
For srs, working sounds like the worst, but apparently everyone has to do it I'mma remain a kid forever
Pffft, who the hell do you think I am (haven't watched Gurren since we last discussed watching Gurren, but hey); I is teh anti-responsiblest. Been mostly busy with things irl with the school year wrapping up and such.
THE MELODRAMA ;-; although it was definitely one of the pieces I spent a lot more time refining, I think. I mostly drew inspiration from some stuff we did in class at my school; most of my stuff isn't nearly as philosophical and gross as that, and it was an interesting problem trying to juggle the thought process and the plot. I'd be flattered if you made a fanfic, though Maybe you could address all of the worldbuilding problems that I kind of ignored, heh. xD
Never tried getting too clever with writing, but I suspect as far as philosophy is concerned it would end up looking rather like something Terry Pratchett might have come out with (yeah, you've probably already guessed he's my literary idol). How's the writing coming on?
I decided to give your fanfic a try, haven't had much time to go past the prologues yet but I'm certainly enjoying your setting so far and the detail you've put into worldbuilding. I can visualize it as something like an official manga once it gets rolling... like, the sort of original Pokemon concepts that get adapted, if that makes sense. I grew up in the Outer Banks so the oceanfront setting is vivid in my mind and definitely makes it stand out as far as 'academy' concepts go. I also like how you worked in convincing original Pokemon into it early on, that was certainly a nice change of pace to see that creative aspect thrown in compared to stories that just describe a Pokemon we've seen a hundred times already in ten games and expect us to get pumped up about it =P
There are a few more nitpicky minor criticisms that came to mind, mainly just regarding syntax flow and grammar in a couple of spots, but I'd like to read through at least a good chunk more of it before really leaving a detailed review and my initial reaction is certainly positive. I'm definitely intrigued so far and looking forward to reading through more
(Chigon is the best Pokemon ever by the way I want one)
Yeah I guess that's true. They did make that comparison that the witches may mess around with Beato's game but they're still limited to its rules. I'm just waiting for the rules explanation, kinda like how they explained Higurashi's rules X, Y, Z.
Haha I guess he already has, his catchphase always laments his misfortune
Why? What's actually wrong with it for the most part?
Kind of. I've just finished the first of two weeks off for Easter, but this next week really needs to be spent on the huge amount of work I have to do.
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