Pain Split
Waffles.
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I was thinking of writing this Pokémon fic (and even wrote up a rough draft for the first chapter). It included a Vulpix getting abandoned by her Trainer on a blizzardy mountain range, and eventually giving up on life out there, a Cubone's mother dying from exhaustion in a barren desert, and finally that same Cubone going insane, ripping out his mother's skeleton, and finally dying alongside his mother's corpse.
Now, a couple things I was wondering pertaining to this:
Firstly, how would the readers react to this, and would it get good or bad reception? I want people to like my writing.
Secondly, how would I have to rate it? The Cubone's side of the story is taken entirely in his perspective, so the story itself inherits Cubone's insanity. He perceives that ripping out his mother's skeleton is just a twisted mental image, so that's what the story says, but it will also have some implications that it really did happen.
Now, a couple things I was wondering pertaining to this:
Firstly, how would the readers react to this, and would it get good or bad reception? I want people to like my writing.
Secondly, how would I have to rate it? The Cubone's side of the story is taken entirely in his perspective, so the story itself inherits Cubone's insanity. He perceives that ripping out his mother's skeleton is just a twisted mental image, so that's what the story says, but it will also have some implications that it really did happen.