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Finally got onto commenting and I'm impressed by the fic and I'm curious to see the rest of Samia's team. One problem I've seen is you dont have the trainers calling out attacks which is fine and I use the same method but you've got to say what attacks are being used
you see this could be aerial ace, wing attack or even steel wing but there's no way of telling. Other than that great fic and I look forward to reading on.
Normally I do have trainers calling out attacks, it was just in this last chapter that it wasn't. This was because it was from Samia's POV, and he wouldn't have been able to hear what the attacks are, just see them